HEART BREAK
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Silvery rays from the sky
will have no meaning now
never same will be the dawn.
Waves shirk to embrace beach
day sobs, night weeps
breeze no longer rustles the leaves.
Flowers robbed of their magic
fragrance no more validating their love
cuckoo loses her voice and
wait becomes redundant for dusky eyes.
Heart is drained of emotions
mind in the process of evaluation
body limited to the motions,
as some one dearest
to the heart, mind and
soul
first loved,
then left
never to return.
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Syamala Vemuri
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It is companionship which is more important than compatibility. After staying many years together this is more valuable.
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V A Sambandam
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Wonderful & heart breaking poem.We know the value of our beloved only when they leave us permanently & we see hell on earth before death!!!.
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Sikandera Mir Words tell of a loss and pain. Wish relief and patience..easier said than done..i know.
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Sarala Ram Kamal touching
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Tapeshwar Prasad Poignant... touching!
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Pramila Khadun Feeling sad.
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ReplyDeleteSyamala Vemuri It is companionship which is more important than compatibility. After staying many years together this is more valuable.
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Ravi Ranganathan Very touching.
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V A Sambandam Wonderful & heart breaking poem.We know the value of our beloved only when they leave us permanently & we see hell on earth before death!!!.
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Deepak Budki Overhauling or replacement is thougt after the machine has worked for a given time.
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Tadala SN Murthy a nice poem. But some love last only for seven years after marriage. Probably subjugation is needed, after all.
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Jai Krishna The best poem amongst those you have posted. Much balanced and matured
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Neelofar Neelu Very beautiful
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Ramesh Pathania Very nice Kaul Saheb
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Vasudha Kanupriya Someone dearest to the heart.....first loved, then left...never to return... so nice!
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VAS 13 hours ago
ReplyDeleteMy dearest poet TK,
Really heart touching & breaking song.
We realise the value of our beloved generally after they leave us permanently.
Yes our heart,mind,soul,all cry&worry for our loved one,who left us once for all, but in few days or months we return back to normal and do our routine and enjoy life with the remining loved ones.
That is life which is not permanent to all of us.
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Hari1941 4 hours ago
ReplyDeleteA soul touching poem, indeed.
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ramanis49 4 hours ago
ReplyDeleteVery touching.....!
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Harmeet Gulati
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superb <3 <3 :)
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Bindu Kulshrestha wah kya bat hai
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Lal Bahadur Singh Very nice expression
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