A Lonely Lover
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Aloof I am and far from you
Coasting
along, lonely in a boat
Waves
of thoughts surge me ahead
With
remembrance as an oar, I row.
Goal
being that shining star,
Destiny,
I know not
Sucked
into the worldly whirlpools,
are
my wandering thoughts
Impenetrable
darkness shrieks
A
lass sings a sad song of separation
Moon
disappears on lunar day
Sky
weeps in appreciation.
Fire
ranges in the forest
air
chokes suddenly
waves
stop, just to rest
flowers
withering, untimely.
Obstructive
becomes egoistic attitude
In
our union and fortitude
decades
are spent In lament
lost
is the relevance of gratitude.
Lost
if I am, search for that elusive pearl
on
the pretext of finding a shell
reach,
embrace and kiss me
even
if it takes eternity.
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rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul/ Published in Purple Hues and released on 26
April 2015
Pramila Khadun Great poem.
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Meetu Nadir Beautiful poem sir!
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Jen Walls Wonderful! Thanks for sharing. <3
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Vasudha Kanupriya Nice
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Neelamani Sutar Magnificent!
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Babu Yesterday, 21:07
ReplyDeleteVery well written Poem. Could have been a liitle longer.
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VAS 13 hours ago
My dearest TK,
Good poem on lonely lover.
Yes lonely lover long for lover.Their goal is to get that shining star!!!.They love,praise sky high,long to see/speak/touch...all till the marriage!!!..
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Hari1941 5 hours ago
I wrote somewhere else. Love is a feeling which disappears as soon as it appears and all it leaves behind is pain and sadness.
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