Thursday 25 May 2017

Musing of an Autistic

Musing of an Autistic
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Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction
Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm
Shore allows waves to touch and back they go
Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm.

Thoughts merge misreading thoughts
Natural are weird ways to reverse actions
Mind seeks answers through hidden potentials
Ready to take off sans pretentions.

Ah! Can’t beat the blues which come free
Hand me something to play and let you see
Acceptance makes me accepted, energizing me
Let the river flow why build dam over me?

Grappling with my mood swings, I enjoy
Look into my eyes and say ‘ahoy’
Learning curves may be like ECG
Life can’t be smooth, so let it be.

Oh! Come now, let you understand
Reassuring touch make me stand
Complexities are boon and not to abhor
Open your arms and open your doors.

Fields ploughed, seeds grow emotions
Nourishment through parent’s devotion
Watch me cross barriers of all kind
Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.
Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.
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All rights reserved/ Tribhawan Kaul



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Note:- The poem has been included in Different Truths anthology in April 2017
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ps :-This is highly satisfying. My latest poem ‘ Musing of an Autistic’ which was selected and included in Different Truths anthology in April 2017 is going to be declard ‘POEM OF THE DAY’ on 10th June, 2017 by one of the most prestigious international poetic website Poemhunter.com . Received an e-mail to that effect yesterday (27th May 2017). The poem has been posted on my timeline on 25th May 2017. Please scroll down to read, if interested. 
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To Tribhawan Kaul 27 May at 1:05 PM
Dear Poet;
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14 comments:

  1. Rajnish Manga (5/25/2017 11:08:00 AM)

    Your effort to bring into focus the disorder of autism is highly commendable. A timely call to chane our outlook. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
    Complexities are boon and not to abhor
    Watch me cross barriers of all kind
    Sky is the limit for a beautiful mind.
    +++
    Tribhawan Kaul(5/27/2017 2:06:00 AM)
    Thank you dear Rajnish for visiting my page. Yes, we have to change our perception towards this disorder.
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  2. Marie Shine (5/29/2017 12:46:00 PM)

    Children born with autism are geniuses within a human body. They can understand complicated technological data that many so called 'norma' human beings can't grasp. They are so loving, it is a privilege to be a parent to such a wonderful child. In Ireland, autistic children are incorporated into main stream education and are beloved by all. They sit Exam's and come out extremely well, are very successful, but it depends on the level of autism if work can be procured or not. I love this poem which pays tribute to these beautiful angels and to their parents who take care of and look after them. Beautifully crafted and eloquently expressed, the poem is a gem! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always...
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    Tribhawan Kaul(5/30/2017 1:27:00 AM)
    Thank you Marie for your gracious and insightful comment. Yes, these children do prove gems for the societry if taken care of properly. Stay blessed.
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  3. Jen Walls
    "...sky is the limit for a beautiful mind..."
    Love love love bliss
    May 27 at 11:49am
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  4. Anam Das
    Superb !
    May 25 at 8:24pm
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    Vijay Mishra
    Very nice
    May 25 at 9:40pm
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  5. Date & Time: 6/2/2017 2:12:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Pintu Mahakul
    Comment: Complexities are boon and not to abhor. Opening arms we hug the moments and opening doors we allow love to enter home. Sky is amazing and this is limit of a beautiful mind. We witness this daily that sea is noisy but very calm. Sea carries love and this sprinkles love through waves to shore and through breeze to air and visitors. Love has no boundary. This can reach to every corner. Love is eternally present within us and in nature. Only we need to perceive through beautiful mind. This is also an interesting and excellently penned memorable poem shared here. Children are ever eager to know more and more about new inventions and technology. Children carry innocence and love. They are definitely geniuses. Congratulations for creating such an affectionate poem here....10
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  6. Pintu Mahakul
    This is a great moment to hear to see your poem in PH as poem of the day on 10th June 2017. I shall read this there on that same date. My heartiest congratulations to you. Being one of your old fellow poet in PH I feel so proud of you. This is your great achievement. CONGRATULATIONS!
    May 29 at 2:03pm
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    Arindam Barua
    Gone through it, great work dear poet!!
    May 29 at 4:21pm
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    Main Hoon Ali
    You are incredible sir.Congrats
    May 30 at 11:16am
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    V A Sambandam
    Hearty congrats to my dear International poet TK.
    May 30 at 6:17pm
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    Sarindha Sethi
    Congratulations TKji, You deserve this. :)
    June 1 at 8:42pm
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  7. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 12:52:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Robert Murray Smith
    Comment: A poem that traverses boundaries set up by autistic minds.+++10
    Congratulations on poem of the day.
    Robert
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  8. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 1:45:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Bernard F. Asuncion
    Comment: Let the river flow.... congrats on being chosen... a big 10++++++++
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  9. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 2:10:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Edward Kofi Louis
    Comment: Yet lacks conviction! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with
    us.
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  10. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 4:32:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Bharati Nayak
    Comment: Ah! Can't beat the blues which come free
    Hand me something to play and let you see
    Acceptance makes me accepted, energizing me
    Let the river flow why build dam over me?
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    Oh! Come now, let you understand
    Reassuring touch make me stand
    Complexities are boon and not to abhor
    Open your arms and open your doors.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - A touching write about the children with autism.Thanks for spreading awareness through your wonderful poem.Congratulations for being Poet of the Day for a well deserving poem.
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  11. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 4:42:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Jeannette Heywood
    Comment: Beautiful poem giving us a very useful insight into the autistic mind.
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  12. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 5:53:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Geetha Jayakumar
    Comment: A thought provoking write. I would like to bow the parents who accept when they know about their child. They deal with the child with lot of patience and care. Awareness should be created in society as well that these children need to be treated as normal. Beautiful write. Loved reading the poem with unique concept.

    Beauty flow in words....

    Love knows no boundaries yet lacks conviction
    Wondering why the sea is noisy yet so calm
    Shore allows waves to touch and back they go
    Sand watch helplessly as none applies balm.
    Congratulations on member poem of the day. Thanks for sharing with us.
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  13. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 5:56:00 AM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Tom Allport
    Comment: a wonderful poem that gives the reader some idea of what it might be like to have this health condition? ..........superbly written
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  14. Date & Time: 6/10/2017 12:12:00 PM
    Poem: 49141618 - Musing Of An Autistic
    Member: Rini Jerry
    Comment: Thanks for sharing this poem. It's our responsibility to support these children to attain their dreams and treat them as normal.they are children with high intelligence, great people who were autistic were Einstein, Newton.......Congratulations for being selected as poem of the day.
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