प्यार को रिश्तों में बांधना नहीं लगता अच्छा
बस, उनका आना लगे भला और जाना बुरा I
(Pyar ko rishton mei bandhna nahi lagta accha
Bus, unka aana lage bhalla aur jaana bura)
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल /सबरंग
Anam Das
ReplyDeleteवाह ! उत्तम रचना !
May 26 at 11:10pm
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Suresh Pal Verma Jasala
वाहहहह बहुत खूब,,
May 26 at 11:50pm
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
ReplyDeleteवाहहह
May 27 at 2:45am
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Lata Yadav
वाह वाह
देख उनको होठों पर खिंची जो पतली लकीर
वो समझ बैठे हम जिंदा हैं उनके बगैर
May 27 at 3:47am
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डॉ किरण मिश्रा
वाह
May 27 at 9:15am
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A S Khan Ali
Waah!
May 27 at 10:08am
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Arvind Asar
Waah
May 27 at 10:27am
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Meenakshi Sukumaran
Wow so true
May 27 at 11:43am
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DeleteThe comments did not belong to this poem.It belogned to the post/poem ' Nakaam Mohabbat.....' posted above. Hence deleted.
DeletePintu Mahakul
ReplyDeleteThis is another writing that amazes mind. Love is wonderful.
June 2 at 11:58am
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Tribhawan Kaul
Love is eternal too...thank you. :)
June 2 at 11:59am
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Pintu Mahakul
Love is eternal and love is eternal power that we inherit from God.
June 2 at 11:59am
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Pintu Mahakul
Love is eternal and love is eternal power that we inherit from God. We feel this love inside self. On awakening love vibrates its power and we get path to connect God.
June 2 at 12:00pm
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Tribhawan Kaul
Well said :)
June 2 at 12:13pm
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