Love no more
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Betraying my trust yet professing his love
Standing at crossroads I can’t be a dove.
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His hate induces me to love words more
Songs I sing , none for him to adore.
Wandering in the maze of mood swings
Heart seeks inspiration from clouds to
sing.
Infidelity in mind, love remains
undefined
A thin line of faith, excuses are more
refined.Betraying my trust yet professing his love
Standing at crossroads I can’t be a dove.
Land, moon, stars and waterfalls
Muses are there to make me enthrall.
Waves of pain strike the shore, time and
again
Time for me to compose, rewriting my
fate again.
Incomplete in love, I search words to
express
Poetry makes me exuberant and to
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Date & Time: 11/30/2017 7:47:00 PM
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Member: Kumarmani Mahakul
Comment: This is a very thought provoking poem that powerfully expresses emotion on love and friendship. Wandering in the maze of mood thought swings. Betraying trust is so sad. Still we hope love and trust will unite in life for beautiful friendship. Excellently penned poem is shared.10
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Date & Time: 11/30/2017 1:06:00 PM
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Comment: Such a brilliant write, Tribhawan... a highest 10👍👍👍
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Vandaana Goyal 3:37pm Dec 1
Wow beautiful poem
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया 3:43pm Dec 1
Yes, writing is therapeutic. Lovely poem!
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Rekha Joshi 5:23pm Dec 1
Beautiful poem
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Main Hoon Ali
December 1 at 7:50pm
Your search is always nice sir whether complete or incomplete. Beautiful.
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Sandra Martyres
December 1 at 8:57pm
Nicely rhymed too
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Shailesh Gupta 10:23am Dec 2
Incomplete in love, I search words to express
Poetry makes me exuberant and to address....wonderful...sir...!!..Brilliant write..!!
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Lovely & profound !
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Sonia Vaid 6:22pm Dec 2
This is beautiful!!!
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Alby Raymond Parackal
Great expressions!
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V A Sambandam
February 6 at 9:03am
I search words to appreciate your poetry skill.
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Deepmala Maheshwari
February 7 at 11:11am
Pain expressed nicely