Sunday 1 November 2015

दुपदी (Couplet)-9



कल 01-11-2015 सुश्री इंदिरा शर्मा जी के निवास स्थान पर हुई गोष्ठी में मैंने एक दुपदी, एक चतुष्पदी और एक हास्य रास की कविता का पाठ किया. उनमे से दुपदी और चतुष्पदी आप सब साहित्य मनीषिओं को एवं कविजनो को सादर प्रेषित हैं :-

दुपदी-9
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रचनाएँ न तोलो छंद मापनी के तराज़ू में
मेरी भावनाओं को खुला आसमान चाहिए
Rachnayen na toto chand maapni ke taraazu mein
Meri bhavnaon ko khulaa aasmaan chahiye.
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/त्रिभवन कौल


8 comments:

  1. Indira Sharma 3:54pm Nov 2
    भावनाओं को खुला आसमान चा हिए .वाह
    via fb/YUSM

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  2. Brahma Dev Sharma 12:52am Nov 3
    बहुत खूब लिखा और कहा गया , सुना गया > बधाई
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    Lata Yadav 12:45am Nov 3
    वाहहहह आदरणीय बहुत ही सुन्दर बात
    नमनआपको व हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ
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  3. Comments received in January 2016 on my Timeline/FB
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    Tarsem Kaur
    January 12 at 11:08pm
    सही फ़रमाया आदरणीय
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    AnjumKanpuri GurdeepSingh Kohli
    January 12 at 10:58pm
    Bahut khoob.
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    गुप्ता कुमार सुशील
    January 12 at 10:03pm
    बहुत ही सुन्दर उद्गार , नमन
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    DrShaista Irshad
    January 12 at 7:19pm
    Bahot khoob
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  4. Comments received in January 2016 on my Timeline/FB
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    Neeti Banga
    January 12 at 7:11pm
    Bahut khoobsoorat!
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    Janmejay Trivedi
    January 12 at 6:52pm
    Bilkul
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    Indira Sharma
    January 12 at 5:43pm
    Mere dil ki baat kahdi aapne . dhanybaad. Rachnaon ko chahie unmukt aakaas udne ko
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  5. Comments received in January 2016 on my Timeline/FB
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    Ashok Ashq
    January 12 at 5:39pm
    वाह्ह्ह्ह्ह क्या बात है
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    अकेला इलाहाबादी
    January 12 at 5:31pm
    वाहहहहह बहुत खूब |
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    शब्द मसीहा
    January 12 at 5:26pm
    वाह
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    Suresh Goswami Sureshji
    January 12 at 5:15pm
    गहरी और विचारयोग्य बात...
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    Om Prakash Shukla
    January 12 at 5:05pm
    क्या बात है ,,,, वाह
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  6. Comments received in January 2016 on my Timeline/FB
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    Shantnu Barar
    January 12 at 4:48pm
    वाह
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    Uddhav Deoli
    January 12 at 4:38pm
    वाह्ह्ह्हह्ह्ह्हह ठीक कहा माननीय|
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    Hari Lakhera
    January 12 at 4:31pm
    Jahan na pahunche ravi wahan pahunche kavi, wah wah !!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Sumit Rajora
    January 12 at 4:28pm
    Nice concept sir.
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    Suresh Pal Verma Jasala
    January 12 at 4:28pm
    अति सुंदर
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  7. Comments received in January 2016 on my Timeline/FB
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    Ramkishore Upadhyay
    January 12 at 4:22pm
    सत्य कथन
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    Shyamal Sinha
    January 12 at 4:08pm
    मेरे भाव को देखो, नापो नहीं मुझे छंदों में , भाव बिखर गए तो मैं बंध जाऊँगा फंदों में ! सादर ~> श्यामल सिन्हा
    Shyamal Sinha
    January 12 at 4:07pm
    बाबा नागार्जुन भी यही कहते थे सौ फी सदी सही माननीय
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    Sonu Sharma Bhanu
    January 12 at 3:34pm
    वाह एक दम सही

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    Mukesh Srivastava
    January 12 at 3:29pm
    sahee kahaa
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    नेहा वर्मा
    January 12 at 3:12pm
    Beautiful and apt !!
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    Raj Kumar CrowningLove
    January 12 at 2:42pm
    Bahut khoob kaul sahab. I do second this thought.
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    डॉ विवेक सिंह 2:08pm Jan 12
    उत्तम

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