Tuesday 30 June 2015

दुपदी-2

दुपदी-2
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पत्थर जो हाथ आया तेरे, फितरत तेरी सरे आम हो गयी

मारक बना तो रावण बने, पूजा तो ज़िंदगी राम हो गयी.

Paththar jo haath aaya tere, fitrat teri sare aam ho gayi

Maarak bana to Raavan bane, pooja to zindgi Ram ho gayi.
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/त्रिभवन कौल

12 comments:

  1. Nk Manu 3:02pm Jun 30
    बहुत खूब।
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    Prince Mandawra 2:49pm Jun 30
    सुंदर वाह्ह्ह

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  2. Ramkishore Upadhyay 3:21pm Jun 30
    मारक बना तो रावण बने, पूजा तो ज़िंदगी राम हो गयी.--अनुपम सृजन

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  3. Indira Sharma 3:27pm Jun 30
    Bahut sundar

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  4. Dogendra Singh Thakur 4:32pm Jul 1
    Waahhh..
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    Kavindra Dhir 10:43pm Jun 30
    waaaaaah
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    Shyamal Sinha 4:25pm Jun 30
    बहुत ख़ूब लाज़वाब माननीय
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    Main Hoon Ali 3:38pm Jun 30
    Very nice words on basic instinct...thank u sir.

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  5. Anushka Yadav 8:35pm Jun 30
    bahut sundar ! waah
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    Bindu Kulshrestha 7:32pm Jun 30
    waah tribhuvn sir

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  6. Jai Krishna 9:40pm Jun 30
    Wah sir , is dwipadi pe ja nisar.

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  7. Ranjna Nautiyal 6:29pm Jun 30
    बहुत सुन्दर
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    Priya Vachhani 4:47pm Jun 30
    Wahh
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    Pooja Bansal 2:58pm Jun 30
    Wahhh
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    Mukesh Srivastava 2:49pm Jun 30
    waah

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  8. Pradeep Sharma 7:19pm Jun 30
    वाह ,क्या कह दिया आपने सर
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    Chanchlesh Shakya 5:06pm Jun 30
    अतीव सुंदर ...सार्थक..
    नमन...लेखनी को ..सादर
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    जितेन्र्द कुमार 'राजन' 3:48pm Jun 30
    nice

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  9. अंकिता कुलश्रेष्ठ बेहतरीन
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    Manish Tyagi बहुत खूब
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    प्रदीप शर्मा बहुत खूब
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    Prince Mandawra अति उत्तम
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    via fb/kavyody

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  10. Jai Krishna
    छोटे कलेवर की कविता में जान डाल देना कोई आप से सीखे .
    June 30 at 11:08pm
    ===================================via fb/amaltaash ke hum shatdal in June 2016

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  11. June 2016 via fb/Purple Pen
    Vandaana Goyal
    वआह
    June 30 at 12:08pm
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    Kailash Nath Shrivastava
    बहुत सुन्दर. कथन वाहहह
    June 30 at 12:19pm
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    अनुपम सृजन, आदरणीय
    June 30 at 1:00pm
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    Dogendra Singh Thakur
    Jordar sir💐💐
    June 30 at 11:41pm
    -------------------------------via fb/ Purple Pen

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  12. Kamlesh Kumar Verma
    वाह ! सुन्दरतम
    June 30 at 7:52pm
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    Omprakash Prajapati
    सुन्दर
    July 1 at 7:30am
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    Ravi Garg
    Jai Mata Ki Jai Ho
    July 2
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    Vinod Tiwari
    लाजवाब सर जी
    July 3
    ==================June 2016 via fb/True media

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