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पत्थर जो हाथ आया तेरे,
फितरत तेरी सरे आम हो गयी
मारक
बना तो रावण बने, पूजा तो ज़िंदगी राम हो गयी.
Paththar
jo haath aaya tere, fitrat teri sare aam ho gayi
Maarak
bana to Raavan bane, pooja to zindgi Ram ho gayi.
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Nk Manu 3:02pm Jun 30
ReplyDeleteबहुत खूब।
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Prince Mandawra 2:49pm Jun 30
सुंदर वाह्ह्ह
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Ramkishore Upadhyay 3:21pm Jun 30
ReplyDeleteमारक बना तो रावण बने, पूजा तो ज़िंदगी राम हो गयी.--अनुपम सृजन
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ReplyDeleteBahut sundar
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बहुत ख़ूब लाज़वाब माननीय
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Main Hoon Ali 3:38pm Jun 30
Very nice words on basic instinct...thank u sir.
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ReplyDeleteवाह ,क्या कह दिया आपने सर
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Chanchlesh Shakya 5:06pm Jun 30
अतीव सुंदर ...सार्थक..
नमन...लेखनी को ..सादर
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जितेन्र्द कुमार 'राजन' 3:48pm Jun 30
nice
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ReplyDeleteछोटे कलेवर की कविता में जान डाल देना कोई आप से सीखे .
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वआह
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बहुत सुन्दर. कथन वाहहह
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
अनुपम सृजन, आदरणीय
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Dogendra Singh Thakur
Jordar sir💐💐
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ReplyDeleteवाह ! सुन्दरतम
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लाजवाब सर जी
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