Sunday, 21 September 2014

Spin of a coin

Spin of a coin
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Analyse a coin smiling on our stupidity

Infusing  positivity and negativity

Our mind absorbs the rays

Mental attitude holds the sway

Actions initiated accordingly

Myth of a coin busted

Loser blames the luck

Winner praises the luck.

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  1. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 00:29

    Valsa George (9/18/2014 12:51:00 AM)
    Tossing the coin and deciding one's luck is a myth that has to be busted! One's mental attitude infuences everything! Succinct and beautiful!

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 00:30

    Ging Taping (9/20/2014 1:16:00 AM)
    Nice poem Sir, thanks for sharing

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 00:31

    S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (9/21/2014 9:53:00 AM)
    Wow i love such poems on uncommon topics and u hav writen an impresive interesting poem on coin spin.

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 00:32

    Shantnu Barar
    this very poem speak so much

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 04:50

    VAS
    My dear TK,
    Very short and straight to the point.
    Spin of the coin can't determine the win and at times spinners decides the win.
    Luck not the reason for win, effort and who run for win will win.

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 04:51

    Babu
    Toss as it is called decides the luck of a team. This should not
    be the case. Pain and efforts are really needed. Good shor tPoem -
    to the point.

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  9. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 04:52

    savi
    Dear TK, nice short thought provoking poem, our luck our fate does not depend on tossing of the coin, yet since time immemorial people have been doing this, head and tails cannot decide our win or life, it has to be individual effort yet it gives some kind of satisfaction when the tossed coin spins in our favour........nice poem dear

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  10. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 05:01

    Very true, this~
    21 Sep by Destiny Smith

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  11. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 05:02

    Spot on! Thanks for sharing.
    21 Sep by Elizabeth Squires

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  12. Tribhawan Kaul22 September 2014 at 05:03

    Very true! You remind me of the movie 'Sholay' where Amitab always tossed that special coin with heads on both the sides ! -Raj
    21 Sep by RAJ NANDY

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