Autumn ( Acrostic)
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Autumn livens the spirit of
nature
Ultimate artist to reckon
Turning maple leaves scarlet
Up above the sky draped in
azure
Making the greens blush with
vibrant shades
New colourful canvass
spreads all over
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Surender Gagroo
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Anish Vyavahare
ReplyDelete"Hey, very nice!"
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Hasmukh Mehta
ReplyDelete"Nice autumn......Spring had last laugh To be seen rough A wind started blowing northward Shaking the leaves backward It was warning In early morning That was first sign For the arrival of autumn Spring got alarmed So far nothing was harmed Her pride feeling was hurt Autumn had been severe with so short notice Yes nothing remains permanent There has to be past and no present Tomorrow is knocking door Think not of falling on floor Yes, it is sign of fall Days are over for scaling wall We are all victim of circumstances From time to time, we must change our stance It is good to bend Make foe a friend Get prepared for final blow You shall be happy tomorrow"
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Gajanan Mishra (9/24/2014 11:30:00 PM)
ReplyDeletenew colorful canvass, I like it, thanks, (Report)
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (9/24/2014 11:41:00 PM)
ReplyDeleteNature's timeless artistry captured in your words.. a ten..lovely poem..
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Valsa George (9/25/2014 1:38:00 AM)
ReplyDeleteAutumn, especially of the West is perhaps the time to witness Nature's sudden transition from green to yellow, orange scarlet and ochre and maple is the one tree which pronounces this change in the most exquisite way! Beautiful Acrostic!
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A beautiful acrostic, that capturesthe colours of Autumn with style!
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RAJ NANDY
ReplyDeleteLoved reading the acrostic! Never tried writing one so far! Thanks, -Raj
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Fay Slimm
ReplyDeleteThe appealing imagery used in this lovely acrostic brings autumn's colours right to our door. Thank you for sharing it.
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Lovely autumnal poem my friend. Thanks for sharing.
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Yes painters poem!
ReplyDelete25 Sep by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost)
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Colorful canvas...... Being an artist I can relate to that, it's beautiful
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Date & Time: 4/30/2016 7:48:00 AM
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Member: Ratnakar Mandlik
Comment: A marvelous glorification of autumn that unfolds motley wonders of nature and it's numerous manifestations presented through this beautifully penned poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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Date & Time: 5/15/2016 12:43:00 PM
ReplyDeletePoem: 45631772 - Autumn (Acrostic)
Member: Rajnish Manga
Comment: You have captured quite beautifully the colourful change brought about by Autumn. Thanks, Sir.
Turning maple leaves scarlet
New colourful canvass spreads all over
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