Saturday 1 July 2017

द्विपदी -17(Couplet-17)


जीवन को जो उत्सव माने, 

जीने का मर्म वह ही जाने।I

Jeevan ko jo utsav mane

Jeene kaa mrm vohi jaane II
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल

3 comments:

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    Rajesh Srivastava
    सत्य कथन
    July 1 at 8:00pm
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    ओम प्रकाश शुक्ल
    यथार्थ आदरणीय
    July 1 at 8:01pm
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    Suresh Pal Verma Jasala
    वाहहहह शानदार
    July 1 at 8:18pm
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    निशि शर्मा 'जिज्ञासु'
    बहुत सुंदर
    July 1 at 8:51pm
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    सत्य कहा आदरणीय । सादर नमस्कार
    July 1 at 9:29pm
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    Meenakshi Sukumaran
    So true
    July 1 at 9:36pm
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    Rajeshwer Sharma
    सत्य।
    July 1 at 10:36pm
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    Vijay Prashant
    बहुत खूब
    July 1 at 10:56pm
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    Savita Saurabh
    वाह बेहतरीन सृजन आदरणीय
    July 2 at 12:38am
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    Main Hoon Ali
    Nice
    July 2 at 1:48am
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    Adv.Dhirendra Kumar
    सत्य कथन
    July 2 at 8:43am
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  2. Kamal Kant Sharma
    सटीक
    July 1 at 8:33pm
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    Jyotsna Singh
    बरबादियों का सोग मनाना फज़ूल था
    बरबादियों का जश्न मनाता चला गया!
    July 1 at 9:32pm
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    Amrata Mandloi Pota
    वाहह आदरणीय एकदम सटीक
    Yesterday at 8:24am
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  3. Pintu Mahakul
    This is very beautiful really. Short poem this is but deeply philosophical. Life is just like festival in this Earth as we all play our parts. Realizing meaning of time is interesting. Excellent!
    July 2 at 7:49pm
    +++
    Tribhawan Kaul
    Thank you for comprehending the substance. :)
    July 2 at 9:28pm
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