Remembrance
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Sitting on a beach
waves struggling to reach
rough golden sand in hand
slipping through gaping hole
counting.
Staring at stars
that ONE
bright, little, shiny and twinkling
responding
I smile.
Suddenly waves
surge
pondering over the futility of competition
all but one, return to merge
lunging forward,
that lone wave kisses my feet
I feel HIS presence.
Remembrance.............
Only remembrance.
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Rajesh Joshi 4:49pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
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Manish Sharma 8:45pm Sep 19
ReplyDeletemagnificent..
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Reena Prasad 9:06pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteGreat poem
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Kumaara Sukeja 9:18pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteCaptivating !
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Tapeshwar Prasad 9:25pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteTHAT lone wave ~~~
Divine! ♥
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Shyamal Sinha 4:55pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteToo good sir
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Ramesh Pathania 4:58pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteExcellent
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Jai Krishna 6:44pm Sep 19
ReplyDeleteBeautiful . Before it I never found you such mystic .
It is not only a poem but a sculpture . Each word seems to be polished in a lapidary , Every line seems to be crafted and what a true expression of nature and overall the mystic approach , brilliant sir !
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Lily Swarn 9:27am Sep 20
ReplyDeleteBeautiful
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Shailesh Gupta 10:35am Sep 20
ReplyDeleteSuddenly waves surge
pondering over the futility of competition
all but one, return to merge
lunging forward,
that lone wave kisses my feet
I feel HIS presence..... So beautiful....so nice...!!
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