Saturday 19 September 2015

REMEMBRANCE

Remembrance
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Sitting on a beach
waves struggling to reach
rough golden sand in hand
slipping through gaping hole
counting.

Staring at stars
that ONE
bright, little, shiny and twinkling
responding
I smile.

Suddenly  waves surge
pondering over the futility of competition
all but one, return to merge
lunging forward,
that lone wave kisses my feet
I feel HIS presence.

Remembrance.............
Only remembrance.

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10 comments:

  1. Rajesh Joshi 4:49pm Sep 19
    Loved it.

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  2. Manish Sharma 8:45pm Sep 19
    magnificent..

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  3. Reena Prasad 9:06pm Sep 19
    Great poem

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  4. Kumaara Sukeja 9:18pm Sep 19
    Captivating !

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  5. Tapeshwar Prasad 9:25pm Sep 19
    THAT lone wave ~~~

    Divine! ♥

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  6. Shyamal Sinha 4:55pm Sep 19
    Too good sir

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  7. Ramesh Pathania 4:58pm Sep 19
    Excellent

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  8. Jai Krishna 6:44pm Sep 19
    Beautiful . Before it I never found you such mystic .

    It is not only a poem but a sculpture . Each word seems to be polished in a lapidary , Every line seems to be crafted and what a true expression of nature and overall the mystic approach , brilliant sir !

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  9. Lily Swarn 9:27am Sep 20
    Beautiful

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  10. Shailesh Gupta 10:35am Sep 20
    Suddenly waves surge
    pondering over the futility of competition
    all but one, return to merge
    lunging forward,
    that lone wave kisses my feet
    I feel HIS presence..... So beautiful....so nice...!!

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