Sunday 23 November 2014

Nano Poetry

Orphan
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Rain drop on rose petal
A tear on orphan’s pale face
One appears beautiful, other screams.
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Apathy
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Street dog and abandoned child
on pavement  
sharing piece of rotten bread
making mockery of humane humanity.
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Helpers
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Some die, some get injured
People come to help readily in hordes
All valuables are found missing.
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul

13 comments:

  1. Ampat Koshy 8:08pm Nov 23
    love it!

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  2. Tina Purplenblue Clowes Kay 8:50pm Nov 23
    Thought provoking.. Nice writes

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  3. Madan Gandhi 12:27am Nov 24
    beautifull

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  4. Jen Walls 12:29am Nov 24
    Awesome!

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  5. Narendra Rai 8:56am Nov 24
    ((( ♥ )))

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  6. Ranjana Suryavnshi 9:49am Nov 24
    Nice

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  7. Vinod Khanna 9:10pm Nov 24
    Keenly observed!

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  8. Neeti Banga 9:49pm Nov 24
    Beautiful

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  9. Neha R. Krishna 5:47pm Nov 24
    Very nice write

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  10. Shaista Irshad 6:59am Nov 25
    Poignant

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  11. Kaur Rinky 7:01am Nov 25
    wow fabulous

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  12. Shantnu Barar 7:47pm Nov 23
    Take a bow ..first and second one are heart felting ones

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  13. Abdul Wahab 11:25pm Nov 24
    lovely as well as deep .

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