In the solitude of night
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I adore the rise of moon
and the stars shining bright
bringing me your remembrance
in the solitude of night.
Moonlight seems flowery spread on earth
merging in the sea
river quenching its thirst
waves exulting in expectations
rejoice and swoon
under the moon & moonlight
when I remember you
in the solitude of night.
Decked with flowers
lass on a swing
like a cuckoo ,
she then sings
and shehnai* being played far off, echoing.
Hoping to meet her beloved,
she blossoms like a flower of mustard
song of separation makes love deep
her love erupts when separation seeps
all bringing me your remembrance
in the solitude of night
under the moonlight.
Putting me in trance
resonance of your voice
watching me in this state
you glow and rejoice
casting a spell, who deserts me at dawn
remembrance comes again then
under the moonlight
in the solitude of night.
I adore the rise of moon
and the stars shining bright
bringing me your remembrance
in the solitude of night.
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All rights reserved/Children of Lost Gods/Tribhawan Kaul
Shubhra Tandon 1:46am Nov 8
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!!
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Neha R. Krishna 3:03am Nov 8
ReplyDeleteWow write... Beautiful
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Meenakshi Ramasamy 7:15am Nov 8
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
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Aparna Pathak 9:33am Nov 8
ReplyDeleteso very nice
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Pradiptakumar Mohanty 10:15am Nov 8
ReplyDeleteLovely !
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Swadhin Shaktiprasad 10:58am Nov 8
ReplyDeletenicely written...
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Ampat Koshy 10:53pm Nov 7
ReplyDeleteliked the lines about the lass on the swing and the shehnai a lot, sir!
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Sajini Chandrasekera 10:57pm Nov 7
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful
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Tony Hansen 6:53pm Nov 8
ReplyDeletebeautiful and hypnotic
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Sajini Chandrasekera commented on a link you shared.
ReplyDeleteSajini wrote: " beautiful poetry ...loved it :-)"
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Manjiri Chowdary 8:55pm Nov 8
ReplyDeleteThis looks wonderful!!
Hats offf to you sir.
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Sandra Martyres commented on a link you shared.
ReplyDeleteSandra wrote: "Beautiful romantic verses... I imagine a Bharatnatyam dancer's performance evoking these images..."
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Rameshwer Singh 9:34pm Nov 8
ReplyDeleteVery very nice.
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Rahul Ahuja 1:37pm Nov 9
ReplyDeleteAmazing write
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Vanita Lilly-India Patel 8:39pm Nov 9
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....x
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Nazre Imam 10:59pm Nov 9
ReplyDeleteSuperb.. i loved it.
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ReplyDeleteCharu wrote: "Each and every word like the silent echo of beloved's heart ......just speecless....(y)" -
Abhik Shome 9:37pm Nov 10
ReplyDeleteVery melodic in it's annotations Mr.Kaul.
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Sarala Ram Kamal 10:33pm Nov 11
ReplyDeletesuperb :)
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Babu Nov 11
ReplyDeleteI adore this song........
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Hari1941 Nov 11
ReplyDeleteBeautiful love poem TK.
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danda008 Nov 12
ReplyDeleteNice poem, full of emotions.
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savi0301 Nov 12
ReplyDeleteA wonderful poem from a wonderful human heart.
An emotional poem the lover remembers his love in the solitude of night, when the moon is shining in the night with its milky aura making the atmosphere romantic. .
While the world sees the moon as a moon, the lover may look at the moon and see his beloved's smiling face there. Night, moon stars all have an enchanting affect on the lover's heart and mood.
Nice poem dear TK, enjoyed reading it.
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VAS Nov 12
ReplyDeleteI adore my dearest poet TK for his admirable lovely and lively song.
Moon lite and night always sought by lovers that make their life/face bright.
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