Shame of the Sin
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Ashamed to be shamed
By cruelty and brutality
Perpetrated by RAPE
Sorry ! Sorry !
Not my offspring,
Such dishonor to bring,
As scriptures defined
Only seven sins
In the family
Why blacken me ?
Who is it then ?
Perhaps
An illegitimate son from
Malicious thoughts of modern man
Under the garb of famed Illiteracy,
Ill-gotten wealth, pornography or booze
Must be hanged till death, by the noose
Until then I shall remain ashamed.
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Tribhawan Kaul/Children of Lost Gods
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Hardeep Sabharwal
April 18 at 7:56pm
True
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Shwetabh Pathak
April 18 at 8:31pm
Yeah ! Very beautiful poem . I have read this poem in your book. Very nice poem ! These demons must be brutally murdered and hanged
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Olfa Philo
April 18 at 9:23pm
Definitely dear poet Tribhawan Kaul !
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Fatima Afshan
April 18 at 9:25pm
Very true
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Ramkishore Upadhyay
April 18 at 10:23pm
Really pathetic
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
April 18 at 10:43pm
Yes.... must be hanged till death..... the poem is relevant even today....
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Rajeshwer Sharma
April 18 at 11:10pm
True. Sir
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Rita Thakur 8:24pm Apr 18
Very nice poem !
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Rajnee Ramdev 8:44pm Apr 18
Very nice
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मुरारि पचलंगिया 8:44pm Apr 18
त्वरित प्रतिक्रिया स्वरूप
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मानवता अब है कहाँ, दुष्टों का है राज ।
कोई कुछ सुनता नहीं, बिगड रहे सब काज ।।
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया 8:44pm Apr 18
Beautufully penned
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Neelam Sahu 8:53pm Apr 18
Extremely thought provoking
With deep undercurrent of pathos
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Sumera Qureshi 9:22pm Apr 18
I'm sharing it if you allow!
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Manish Suthar 9:22pm Apr 18
Under the garb of ... So nice
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Pimmi Nag 9:22pm Apr 18
Sadly to see how things are...a beautiful write
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Pintu Mahakul
April 19 at 1:10pm
Cruelty and brutality always bring shame and this poem is really amazingly very thought provoking. We feel so sad if any bad act happens. We offer our prayer before God for peace and humanity.
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Deepika Maheshwari
April 20 at 7:58pm
Sir I appreciated your poem.... Ye bilkul sach hai.... True!!! 😔😔
Sandra Martyres
April 25 at 4:29pm
A pathetic state of affairs!
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