Wednesday 21 June 2017

एक दोहा

तटस्थता भारी पड़े , रचना मान न कोय 

गुटबाज़ी जे ना करी , छूत मानयो तोय।

Tatstha bhaari pdhe, rachna maan n koy 

Gutbaazi je naa kari, choot maanyo toy . 
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल

3 comments:

  1. Nirmal Sharma
    तटस्थता और गुटबाज़ी के अर्थ ?
    June 21 at 8:46pm
    +++
    Tribhawan Kaul
    Neutrality and groupism :)
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    HS Sabharwal
    Wah
    June 21 at 9:08pm
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  2. Chanchala Inchulkar Soni
    सटीक आदरणीय
    June 21 at 5:50pm
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    Pankaj Sharma
    बहुत सुंदर आदरणीय
    June 21 at 8:16pm
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    Ray Singh Suman
    Waaaah
    June 21 at 10:50pm
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    यथार्थ कहा आदरणीय
    June 22 at 7:47am
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  3. डॉ किरण मिश्रा
    वाह
    June 22 at 8:34am
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    Adv.Dhirendra Kumar
    सुन्दर
    June 22 at 9:14am
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    Main Hoon Ali
    क्या खूब लिखा है
    June 22 at 1:33pm
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    वाहहह
    June 22 at 2:20pm
    ----------------------------via fb/TL

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