द्विपदी -16 (Couplet-16)
एक भरम, एक इच्छा, एक दर्द, एक दुआ
है
इंसान ईश्वरीय कर्मों की, हसीन एक सजा
है।I
ek bhram, ek ichcha, ek dard, ek dua hai
insaan ishwariy karmo kee, haseen ek saza hai II
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DrSweet Angel
ReplyDeleteWahhh bahut khoob sir
June 1 at 10:41pm
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Omprakash Prajapati
उम्दा
June 2 at 7:20am
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Anam Das
ReplyDeleteवाह ! मजेदार !
June 1 at 8:32pm
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डॉ किरण मिश्रा
वाह
June 1 at 8:58pm
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Arti Rai
Beautiful... Interesting 👍👍
June 1 at 9:12pm
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Rajeshwer Sharma
Interesting.....sir.
June 1 at 9:13pm
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Ankit Mishra
Loved it
June 1 at 9:16pm
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Suresh Pal Verma Jasala
वाहहहह क्या बात है
June 1 at 10:58pm
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Hema Pandey
लजबाब
June 1 at 11:14pm
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निशि शर्मा 'जिज्ञासु'
बहुत खूब!
June 1 at 11:37pm
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Irfan Ali Khan
wahh
June 1 at 11:48pm
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Pintu Mahakul
Wow..this is extremely beautiful poem shared. Doing Godly duty is good for a soul.
June 2 at 11:17am
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Sarindha Sethi
Beautifully expressive TKji . !
June 2 at 11:24am
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