UNDYING HOPE
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The grandeur visible to the naked eyes
solidified through the very essence
Kashmiriat
yet had cracks appearing from nowhere
Shedding its leaves it had owned since eras
together
Silky dawn was never the same
Nor the murmur of small steam below
The sound of yakho- yekh and hako-haak
Still resounding like a sonic boom
Kandur, navid, and barbuz vaan , the
meeting rooms
Silence greeting with garlands of doom
Someone crooned.
"Kashmirat can’t be dead ? Long live Kashmiriat !"
Hope sustains life and mankind survives
Pillars strong enough to withstand
onslaughts
Religious ethos and social tenets
interweaving the brotherhood
Let it smile through tolerance once again,
it should
I see then, trout jumping out with sheer
joy
Chinars
whistling welcoming change in the
wind
Shikaaras dancing to the tune of the Divine
Birds soaring high scaling unimaginable
Auspicious peaks holding up the avalanches
Sufi singing touching the hearts
Kashmiriat has to be born again the world
over.
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaulyakho- yekh :- raw ice Hako-haak :- green leafy vegitable
Kandur, navid, and barbuz vaan:- bakery, barber and baked channa/peas shop
Date & Time: 6/24/2016 2:40:00 AM
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Member: Rajnish Manga
Comment: Lovely poem which reaffirms the conviction that the cultural bonds can never be severed for ever. Though, the present phase has taken its toll but the spirit of Kashmiriat will remain intact like an invisible thread. Thanks for sharing this emotional saga of Kashmiri Pandits, Sir.
'Kashmirat can't be dead? Long live Kashmiriat! '
Hope sustains life and mankind survives
Pillars strong enough to withstand onslaughts
Religious ethos and social tenets interweaving the brotherhood
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ReplyDeleteWonderful, long live Kashmiriat, .
July 1 at 8:10pm
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Rose Angel Rajshree Kaul
ReplyDeleteJuly 1 at 9:05pm
It is and will revive back to its Grandeur
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Savi Mani
ReplyDeleteJuly 1 at 11:06pm
Great poem....kashmiriat is eternal...it can't nd won't die ..one has to feel it from the eyes of the soul and ears of the heart...three visit to this jannat has made me believe this..
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Jai Krishna
ReplyDeleteJuly 1 at 10:14pm
Great !
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Gina Ancheta Agsaulio
July 2 at 2:41am
Great insight for hope <3 ;)
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Kavita Khanna 3:18am Jul 2
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!!
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Madan Gandhi
July 2 at 4:29am
superb.
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
ReplyDeleteJuly 2 at 10:59am
"Kashmirat can’t be dead ? Long alive Kashmiriat !" You said it!!!!!
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Jagjit Singh Jandu
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Touching, sir <3
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गुप्ता कुमार सुशील
July 2 at 3:46pm
Gr8 Words
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Sarindha Sethi
ReplyDeleteJuly 2 at 5:04pm
Beautifully expressed ! Typical of TKJI ! :)
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Hari Lakhera
Jul 2
As long as people like you are there, Kashmiriat will never die.
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Yaseen Anwer 9:04pm Jul 2
Very nice
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Mishra Krishnakumar 8:50pm Jul 2
nice one sirji
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Rajesh Kumar Singh 4:49pm Jul 2
Great sir..
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Smriti Roy 12:06pm Jul 2
Superb!!!
Date & Time: 7/2/2016 7:00:00 AM
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Member: Valsa George
Comment: Beneath all differences, there is an invisible thread of harmony, though it is broken now and then! Let us hope that slowly it will be linked in tact binding all into a single brotherhood! A poem breathing in intense patriotic sentiments!
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Shabir Ahmad Mir
ReplyDeleteLove this... And how I wish the non-kashmiris could read the tenderness in those typical koshur images... Brilliant sir
July 2 at 12:40pm
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Santosh Bakaya
Santosh Bakaya i love the typically kashmiri imagery
July 2 at 12:52pm
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Nidhi Popli
ReplyDeleteWe all hope for that day...
July 1 at 8:34pm
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Santosh Bakaya
yes , waiting =beautiful !
July 2 at 11:29am
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Sunayana Kachroo
Ghar rud door naar t' door
B' Kya Kya vadaan chass
Kangir' naar akh lokchaar
B' Kya Kya vadaan chass
July 2 at 11:32am
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Tribhawan Kaul
Pos chuh :)
July 2 at 11:35am
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Beautiful!!
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Rekha Joshi 5:42pm Jul 3
I see then, trout jumping out with sheer joy
Chinars whistling welcoming change in the wind
Shikaaras dancing to the tune of the Divine... very nice Sir