I am a Delhi Woman
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I am no more in cage
Flying with fire and rage
Freedom expresses my actions
No more tagging subjugation
I am a Delhi Woman.
Wombs no more silenced under duress
Moon, stars not afraid of the Sun’s ingress
Grace is the path I tread along with heart
in motion
I love my body defining respect in HIS pet
creation
I am a Delhi Woman.
Metro, DTC, autos make me explore and
wander
Fashion, movies, hangouts craving
rejoinders
Arrogant yet confident, feminine yet gritty
in notion
Strong feel of self and I sail through
men’s ocean
I am a Delhi Woman.
A real teacher Delhi and I am a learner
Tricks of the trade where soft is no tender
Poetry in stones of love, romance, passion
CP, GK, malls, wings of shopping
imagination
I am a Delhi Woman.
Girl, wife, mother, I am embodied in these
three
Empowerment, liberation writ large on my
personality
Soaring high, I am adventurous with
ambition
A Delhi woman creates opportunities for
self with tradition
I am a Delhi Woman.
Determination personified, holding fort,
I swing to top
Politics, corporate, sports, academic or
crime fighting cop
Sky is vast and clear is my vision
I am a Delhi woman
I am a Delhi woman.
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Sikandera Mir
ReplyDeleteWoman with her place in Delhi...very nice-
June 14 at 11:19pm
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Jai Krishna
ReplyDeleteVery nice ! Beautifully expressed the vast and clear vision of Delhi woman .
June 14 at 11:30pm
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Ramkishore Upadhyay
ReplyDeleteJune 14 at 11:57pm
बहुत सुंदर कविता
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Fatima Afshan
June 14 at 11:57pm
Poignant!
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Tribhawan Kaul
Why poignant ?
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Main Hoon Ali
June 15 at 1:14am
Yesss poignant.
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Tribhawan Kaul
Why poignant ?
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Gina Ancheta Agsaulio
Dear Tribhawan... poignant is also a reminder of the passing times... touching memories. !! :D
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Gina Ancheta Agsaulio
ReplyDeleteJune 15 at 1:34am
Clear and concise.. <3 :)
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Siamir Marulafau
June 15 at 3:07am
Beautiful writing,which expresses about a Delhi woman.
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Kalpana Shah
ReplyDeleteJune 15 at 3:58am
Why just Delhi Tribhawan Kaul ji ! Aap Mumbai jao ya koi bhi town mein jao every where there are girls and women carrying with confidence. you can draw your analogy anywhere with girl of any corner in the world. There are girls in small town going to watch movies, eat in hotels etc.
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Kalpana Shah
June 15 at 4:00am
Just say, i am The Woman. I am The Woman of any part of the World. I am The Woman. There isnt any need to insert Delhi.
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Hardeep Sabharwal
June 15 at 3:12pm
Apne shehar se lgaav hota ha sabko, shayad isliye unhone delhi insert kiya
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Tribhawan Kaul
Agreed. Women empowerment has induced Indian women to come out of their shell with the advent of 21 century. They are fast shedding their inhibitions and taking the world head on. Though This is a story of Delhi women but in essence it is for all enlightened ones who till date were feeling suppressed. May be I have grown with the all round progress of Delhi once I left my own birthplace Kashmir in J& K State and have special affinity with Delhi. Thanks for your opinion. Thanks for reading the poem. :)
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Jen Walls
ReplyDeleteJune 15 at 5:54am
Gives great poetic licence to think deeply about what really matters inside heart and soul. A thoughtful piece of care. Thanks dear Tribhawan _/\_ Om santih
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Pushp Lata
ReplyDeleteJune 15 at 10:38am
Speechless.... Yes I am Delhi women and feel the same.... very heart touching and true... Congratulations sir for this lovely poem. :)
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Hardeep Sabharwal
June 15 at 3:12pm
Superb work
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Sonia Gupta
June 15 at 3:23pm
Well penned sir
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डॉ किरण मिश्रा
June 15 at 7:38pm
Lovely poem :)
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Sarala Ram Kamal
ReplyDeleteIt is good to see this. But I always understood Delhi women are always bold and strong within as they had always the exposure to be so. A few incidences will not take it away. from each experience they are gathering more strength. good poem :)
June 14 at 11:07pm
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Tribhawan Kaul
They have come out of shell only in 21st century before that they were just like any other woman in the country. Thanks for reading the and giving your lovely opinion.:)
June 14 at 11:15pm
Sarala Ram Kamal
If you saw the state of women here who couldn't cover their upper body and still now most of them are choosing to be the traditional way, either to please others or wanting peace around, you will understand what I said. It is our country with two different state. But there are changes ofcourse. everywhere. women like who lived and exposed to outside world are bold and open. thank you for the words on behalf of all of us. :) Pranam
June 14 at 11:59pm
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Tribhawan Kaul
Thanks a lot. I honour your opinion.
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Very nice ....relevant...write...!!...
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Manasi Gahlot Amen!
ReplyDeleteWonderful write up
June 14 at 11:24pm
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Rajesh Kumar Singh
Wonderful sir..
June 15 at 2:01am
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Archana Anurag Gupta
Beautifully written 😊
June 15 at 9:14am
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नीलोफ़र नीलू
ReplyDeleteSoo beautiful respected Tribhawan Kaul sir😊💐👌
June 15 at 12:12am
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
Determination personified, holding fort, I swing to top
Politics, corporate, sports, academic or crime fighting cop.......... amazingly well expressed, Sir. Yes, Delhi woman is all this.... has grit and determination to survive all odds. Wonderful write!
June 15 at 1:15pm
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V A Sambandam
ReplyDeleteJune 16 at 8:43am
Is that Delhi women so lucky & happy???..We will be soooo happy if they lead a happy,lovely & lively life not only in Delhi but all over India..
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Tribhawan Kaul
Dear VAS. Thanks for reading the poem.Women empowerment has induced Indian women to come out of their shell with the advent of 21 century. They are fast shedding their inhibitions and taking the world head on. Though This is a story of Delhi women but in essence it is for all enlightened ones who till date were feeling suppressed. May be I have grown with the all round progress of Delhi once I left my own birthplace Kashmir in J& K State and have special affinity with Delhi.
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Sagar Kataria
June 16 at 8:15pm
Wonderful words Tribhawan Kaul! Loved reading it :)
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Comment: Yes, women are empowered everywhere, but the capital city offers greater opportunities for their growth!
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