Wednesday, 8 July 2015

Vicious Circle

Vicious Circle
seeking to redeem actions of goodness
like candle flame, eating moths & darkness
slowly turning self into melting drops
the warmest, warmer, warm and cold
getting erased steadily till the last drop
adding to sculpting snowy gold 6’x2’
horizontal statue.
The END.
Is it so ?
Life after death,
goes beyond comprehension
as a soul wanders in oblivion
to light other one, somewhere.
Again I
seek to redeem past actions of goodness
like candle flame, eat moths and darkness.
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  1. Hasmukh Mehta so nice...
    Supreme commander...
    The soul shall respond
    Life fish in pond
    The world seems to be one
    You show your movement to none

    Feel yourself near to God
    And carry no load
    As he is supreme commander
    To take care of and act as messenger
    via fb/RS 8 Jul 15

  2. Sunila Kamal
    Excellent.. It took me to the depths of my soul and existence! Thank you!
    via fb/RS 9 Jul 15

  3. Tapeshwar Prasad
    Soulful.... Great!
    via fb/RS 9 Jul15