Saturday, 11 July 2015

Hospital

Hospital
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Unlimited sufferings and miseries
Taking shelter in this abode
Helplessness fighting
Tooth and nail with despondency
Not easy to gauge
The depth of patient’s emotions when
The life takes an escape route
From the clutches of death often.
A new world it is
Boasting of to- letting pain
Hung between hope and despair
A winner takes it all
and smiles
Loser might have blessed the Death
for end of one’s misery.
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Note : The poem was first posted on FACEBOOK on 11 July 2014 and reposted on 11 July 2015.
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11 comments:

  1. Tribhawan Kaul11 July 2015 at 23:36

    Jai Krishna
    July 11 at 9:15pm
    Very touching in emotion and very temperate in expression . nice poem .

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul11 July 2015 at 23:37

    Sheikh Shahzad Usmani
    July 12 at 10:04am

    Waaah...very nice verse...surprised by this creative writing !!!!!!

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul12 July 2015 at 22:30

    Ramkishore Upadhyay
    July 12 at 12:31pm

    Beautiful words ..

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul13 July 2015 at 06:54

    Sunila Kamal 5:38pm Jul 13
    Loser might have blessed the Death
    for end of one’s misery.... great lines.. :)

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul14 July 2015 at 00:57

    Pramila Khadun 9:55pm Jul 13
    Great write.

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  6. Tribhawan Kaul15 July 2015 at 00:49

    Rameshwer Singh 8:43am Jul 15
    Seen this many times in my life .Wonderfully written.

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul15 July 2015 at 00:50

    वसुधा 'कनुप्रिया' 9:35am Jul 15
    What do I say about this poem....harsh reality

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul16 July 2015 at 04:23

    Babu Jul 12
    Hospital is an abode for sufferings in the initial stage - later
    on immense relief.
    Nicely written poem.

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  9. Tribhawan Kaul16 July 2015 at 04:24

    Hari1941 Jul 13
    A visit to a Hospital makes one realize the realities of living. There are conflicting but complex feelings. Are we victim of our own living style or are we so venerable in the face of environment.

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  10. Tribhawan Kaul16 July 2015 at 04:25

    Shailesh Gupta 9:22pm Jul 15
    Not easy to gauge
    The depth of patient’s emotions when
    The life takes an escape route
    From the clutches of death often..... so intense...and deep right...

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  11. Tribhawan Kaul29 July 2015 at 02:19

    VAS 17 Jul 15, 10:59
    Good poem on Hospital.In that Hospital,we all don't like to be in at all!!!..
    Health & Education to all must be provided by the Govt.In India it's meant for poor only & the treatment & experts there are inadequate.
    Pvt hospitals are keen in making...no minting money all over India.

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