Friday, 18 May 2018



Cruel is the world
No substitute for mercy
Moon is paying for its deeds
To sleep only with fading stars
The universe is not made of moon alone
Planets gather to conspire
To keep the sun always in good humour
Bright is eclipsed too, forget not
Caste, creed, sex, notions always matter
Statutes are burned by insiders
White and black painting the town red
In born nature of a man coming out in open
Progressive and regressive thoughts fight it out
For the supremacy.
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  1. Mridula Menon 12:28pm May 19
    We cannot help long as we live, man craves for supremacy which he tries to get by hook or crook. No more can we say God is in heaven and all is well with the world...all is well only as long as man changes his attitude to life.
    --------------------via fb/ Pearls and Petals -An English Creative Writing

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    Umesh Srivastava
    May 19 at 6:20am
    Ramkishore Upadhyay
    May 18 at 11:50pm
    अति सुंदर रचना

  3. Arif Ahmed JY
    May 21 at 3:24pm
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  4. Pintu Mahakul
    May 21 at 4:05pm
    Moon is paying for its deeds and sleeping stars are dreaming more. This provokes thought while cruelty rushes into this world. Progressive and regressive thoughts fight. But supremacy should be based on righteousness and selfless service. An amazing poem you have written on political views. We expect for peace and development.
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    Hasmukh Mehta
    May 29 at 11:21am
    So lovely and live subject.......Infant democracy Tuesday, 29th May 2018 "Politics" is the tool of the coward it needs no straight word talk big and look forward it has an inferior standard once the power is addicted nothing can be instructed it will fall on the thick skin the fall out may be seen later if it is confined to the serving of the national interest the other people shall not allow you to deliver the best they will form the cartel the consequences may definitely tell "divide and rule" the Britishers were no fool we picked those tricks and give the forcible kick the public has a short memory the people make others feel sorry their boat is made to run in rough weather in an election, they badly suffer we are an infant democracy so suffers the country only rights are remembered but duties part is abandoned Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta From
    Hasmukh Mehta
    May 29 at 10:30am
    u r my inspiration sir