WATER: Second Mahapanchbuta
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Life form sustainer, dear I am water
Destroyer as well, fear, I am water.
Human cleanser, physically and spiritually
“Purifier of souls,” says seer, I am water.
Infusing life in biota*, of every strata
Vanishing element bring tear, I am water.
An element sacred, liquid amongst the elements
Eternal and perishable, O dear! I am water.
Moist, cool, transparent, lubricating, cohesive
changing shapes year after year, I am water.
Keeping bodies cool
but warm, glowing with charm
Symbol of fertility, every mother cheers, I am water.
Harbinger of energy and carrying away wastes
Life line on the earth, putting life into gear, I am water.
Evaporation starts vicious circle forming water bodies
Hydrate, dehydrate keep the balance clear, I am water
Creation of Lord Indra**, omnificent, an element important
Tribhawan sprinkle to purify
dear and near, I am water.
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*Flora and fauna
** Lord of rains
Date & Time: 4/22/2016 6:38:00 AM
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Member: Edward Kofi Louis
Comment: Water is much needed in life. Thanks for sharing.
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Perveiz Ali
So much appealing
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Rasheda Khanom
We can't live without water.very nice . Go ahead .
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Fatima Afshan
Marvellous!
Harish Bhatia
ReplyDeleteMay 2 at 10:44pm
'...O dear! I am Water...' Real good...
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Gina Ancheta Agsaulio
ReplyDeleteMay 2 at 11:29pm
Water is life and soul purifier, we are the daughter/ son of the water too, because our body is made up of 4 elements, FIRE; EARTH; AIR and yes, the WATER. and where we have to swim for 9 months in the womb of our mother. Excellently penned dear Tribhawan <3 :)
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Tribhawan Kaul
Thank you so much.Love you comment. Body is made of five elements, Fire, Earth, Water, Air and Ether/Space as per Hindu scriptures and is scientifically proven too. Just for information
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ReplyDeleteTapeshwar Prasad
May 2 at 11:34pm
Sprinkle for purification ... Same by here too..dear Tribhawan Jee! Such a pious and haloed words! Blessed and be blessed dear Sir! _()_
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Jen Walls
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Deep and lovely beauty
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Main Hoon Ali
ReplyDeleteMay 2 at 10:52pm
Wow sir .....wonderful composition.Loved it :)
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ReplyDeleteRose Angel Rajshree Kaul
May 2 at 11:56pm
This flow of words about water created by itself and in itself ... Beautiful ... May all be purified by water !!
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DrShaista Irshad
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Brilliant
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Khurshid Alam Alam
May 3 at 7:24am
Life line on the Earth is water. wow! it's lovely composition indeed.
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Savi Mani
May 3 at 8:29am
Beautifully written thought provoking ...superb
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
May 3 at 2:54am
Harbinger of energy and carrying away wastes
Life line on the earth, putting life into gear, I am water.... a well crafted piece dedicated to one of the five elements -- water, highlighting it's significance in human life. I presume you have a series dedicated to the five elements, Kaul Sir
Col Charanjit Dayal
ReplyDeleteThe element...very well depicted...
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Ramkishore Upadhyay
wow ...water o water
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Ramesh Rai
ReplyDeleteMay 9 at 12:39pm
The second element which purifies dirt and makes the life to live in. Water is life that so we worship River , pond and rain. Love the concluding line. A worthy write.
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