Friday, 22 April 2016

WATER: Second Mahapanchbuta

WATER: Second Mahapanchbuta

Life form sustainer, dear I am water
Destroyer as well, fear, I am water.

Human cleanser, physically and spiritually
“Purifier of souls,” says seer, I am water.

Infusing life in biota*, of every strata
Vanishing element bring tear, I am water.

An element sacred, liquid amongst the elements
Eternal and perishable, O dear! I am water.

Moist, cool, transparent, lubricating, cohesive 
changing shapes year after year, I am water.

Keeping  bodies  cool  but warm, glowing with charm
Symbol of fertility, every mother cheers, I am water.

Harbinger of energy and carrying away wastes
Life line on the earth, putting life into gear, I am water.

Evaporation starts vicious circle forming water bodies
Hydrate, dehydrate keep the balance clear, I am water

Creation of Lord Indra**, omnificent, an element important
Tribhawan  sprinkle to purify dear and near,  I am water.
All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul 
*Flora and fauna
** Lord of rains


  1. Date & Time: 4/22/2016 6:38:00 AM
    Poem: 45541014 - Second Mahapanchbuta Water
    Member: Edward Kofi Louis
    Comment: Water is much needed in life. Thanks for sharing.
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  2. Via fb/TL April 02
    Perveiz Ali
    So much appealing
    Rasheda Khanom
    We can't live without water.very nice . Go ahead .
    Fatima Afshan

  3. Harish Bhatia
    May 2 at 10:44pm
    '...O dear! I am Water...' Real good...
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  4. Gina Ancheta Agsaulio
    May 2 at 11:29pm
    Water is life and soul purifier, we are the daughter/ son of the water too, because our body is made up of 4 elements, FIRE; EARTH; AIR and yes, the WATER. and where we have to swim for 9 months in the womb of our mother. Excellently penned dear Tribhawan <3 :)
    Tribhawan Kaul
    Thank you so much.Love you comment. Body is made of five elements, Fire, Earth, Water, Air and Ether/Space as per Hindu scriptures and is scientifically proven too. Just for information
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  5. Tapeshwar Prasad
    May 2 at 11:34pm
    Sprinkle for purification ... Same by here too..dear Tribhawan Jee! Such a pious and haloed words! Blessed and be blessed dear Sir! _()_
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  6. Jen Walls
    May 2 at 11:43pm
    Deep and lovely beauty
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  7. Main Hoon Ali
    May 2 at 10:52pm
    Wow sir .....wonderful composition.Loved it :)
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  8. Rose Angel Rajshree Kaul
    May 2 at 11:56pm
    This flow of words about water created by itself and in itself ... Beautiful ... May all be purified by water !!
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  9. DrShaista Irshad
    May 3 at 6:52am
    Khurshid Alam Alam
    May 3 at 7:24am
    Life line on the Earth is water. wow! it's lovely composition indeed.
    Savi Mani
    May 3 at 8:29am
    Beautifully written thought provoking ...superb
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    May 3 at 2:54am

    Harbinger of energy and carrying away wastes
    Life line on the earth, putting life into gear, I am water.... a well crafted piece dedicated to one of the five elements -- water, highlighting it's significance in human life. I presume you have a series dedicated to the five elements, Kaul Sir

  11. Col Charanjit Dayal
    The element...very well depicted...
    May 2 at 8:28pm
    Ramkishore Upadhyay
    wow ...water o water
    May 3
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  12. Ramesh Rai
    May 9 at 12:39pm

    The second element which purifies dirt and makes the life to live in. Water is life that so we worship River , pond and rain. Love the concluding line. A worthy write.
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