Sorry! Dear Vayu*
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Breezing through rustling leaves, signs of a life commence
I adore you as cut on umbilical cord signals your presence.
Most precious of all, you sustain me through vitals
Pran Vayu, the life force to which I am entitle.
Breathing in and out, kriyas** make me feel you near
What is in name if they call you O2 or CO2, my dear.
May be eternal and perishable, what an elixir you are!
Taming you through pranayama#, some think it bizarre.
No weight, no gait but invincible when mobile with force
Unending seems to be the plight when you are on course.
You elude shapes yet shapes elude you not, beauty omnipresent
Purifying livings of toxins by ventilator natural, none to lament.
In balloons or bloated bellies, Air, you do fascinate me
Tornadoes and cyclones fuelling energy, also scare me.
Let me revere and proffer flowers, boon for mankind whole
Sorry! polluted we made you, actions injurious to our souls.
Air air, you are everywhere yet no purity to breathe
In balance our lives hang, wake up or bring me a wreath?
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*Vayu: Air/ Lord of Air in Hindu mythology.
**Kriyas : Actions while doing exercises/yogic exercises
# Pranayama : Regulation of the breath through yogic exercises.
Vayu is one of the most important elements. Others being Earth, Fire, Water and Aether/Space/Aakaash/Shuny
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Pushp Lata 7:54pm Apr 26
Superone sir. Thanks for sharing (y)
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Indrajit Ghoshal
beautiful rendition sir.
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Savi Mani
So beautifully written...air everywhere no purity to breathe...bitter fact of our life....
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Jai Krishna
Profound ! I am amazed.
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अति सुंदर
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April 26 at 11:24pm
THE CONCERN ... well detonated dear Sir! Amazing and timely!!
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Oh wow, what for an amazing expressions..yes, each and everyone of us have an "AIR"clean, or dirty, odorous or fragrant ...well crafted dear Tribhawan <3 :)
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Amazing portrayal of something invisible yet omnipresent . Wonderful indeed
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Hari Lakhera
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And we are constantly endangering our lives by adding to air pollution.
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Col Charanjit Dayal
Beautiful..
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Pradnya Kaithwas
Serene expression... You elude shapes yet shapes elude u not 👌
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Sonia Gupta 😊Well penned sir
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Beautiful poem and well thought .👍
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रतन राठौड़ 7:39am Apr 29
Heart touching, importance of the Air...nice words...nice poem..
On the air...in the air...
Around the air...no one without the air...thx sir
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Manju Bhatnagar 10:21pm Apr 27
Very nice
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया 9:08pm Apr 27
A sensitive piece dedicated to one of the five elements -- air.
Olayemi Ayo
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Beautiful poem , nice write.Splendid!
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Splendid and marvelous write.
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Comment: You have based your narrative on mythology as well as science, on ancient thought as well as present day findings. Loved reading it. Thank you, Tribhawan ji. I would like to quote:
Most precious of all, you sustain me
what an elixir you are! ..... Air air, you are everywhere
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Great write
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