Saturday 4 October 2014

SIX SEASONS IN INDIA ( in senryu series.)


SIX SEASONS IN INDIA ( in senryu series.)

Spring
Love in the air 
Festivals galore 

Summer
Blazing hot
Except thoughts

Monsoon-rains 
Few harvest
Rest going in drains. 

Autumn
Golden, yellow, brown layers 
Naked and bare. 

Fall 
Death and decay 
Of fiery brilliance 

Winter
Icy cold
Everything but heart 
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23 comments:

  1. Anupama Sarkar 5:27pm Oct 4
    Quite impressive...definition of seasons.. looking forward to Winter .Icy Cold. Everything but heart :)

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  2. Shaista Irshad 6:29pm Oct 4
    Fabulous

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  3. Aniruddha Sastikar 6:41pm Oct 4
    Brilliant!

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  4. Santosh Bakaya 5:07pm Oct 4
    great!

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  5. Mou Sircar 5:17pm Oct 4
    Wah ... U described well all the weather Tribhawan Kaul ji!

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  6. Surinder Kumar Tikoo 5:20pm Oct 4
    A unique description of the seasons Kaul Sahib.

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  7. Ampat Koshy 5:56pm Oct 4
    Good

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  8. Santosh Bakaya 5:59pm Oct 4
    Very well described seasons kaul sahab

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  9. Jeetesh Vaishya 7:54pm Oct 4
    bahot achchha :)

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  10. Narsa Goud 8:23pm Oct 4
    Beautiful

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  11. Electric Peace
    Very well written with elegant phrasing and an easy, melodic flow

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  12. RAJ NANDY
    Well composed poem Sir ! Unfortunately here in Delhi, I only get to see terrible Summer and only two months of Winter! Rain is only a passing show! Even now the sun is very hot outside! Thanks, -Raj

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  13. Gajanan Mishra (10/4/2014 1:38:00 AM)
    everything but heart, good writing, thanks

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  14. Valsa George (10/4/2014 7:17:00 AM)
    Succinct and beautiful depiction of seasons! I liked winter the best!

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  15. Heather Burns 9:03pm Oct 4
    nice series Tribhawan

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  16. Nazre Imam 10:26pm Oct 4
    Tribhawan Sir - i always luv to read ur thoughts. Its beautifully penned

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  17. Nalini Priyadarshni 9:57pm Oct 4
    Very nice

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  18. Sanjeev Dash
    Suppeerr like Sir Ji!!!!

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  19. Majhrul Islam
    Simple and lucid and it flows through me like a patch of cloud white....!!!

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  20. Geetha Jayakumar (10/12/2014 1:33:00 PM)
    Lovely seasons captured in a beautiful way. Loved reading each seasons. Thanks for sharing with us

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  21. Date & Time: 10/24/2014 12:27:00 AM
    Poem: 40388761 - Six Seasons in India (in senryu series.)
    Member: Tajudeen Shah
    Comment: instant flash pictures of nature; seasons, the behavior of nature; the elements variations in environment that influences man and animal alike... even reading is feeling, feeling causes recalling, recalling leads to memories, memories (good or bad) has effects in proportion, all is rightly bound to man's soul. your poem reminds me of varied events of the past. though very economic in nature, enjoyed.

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  22. Date & Time: 5/19/2016 1:52:00 AM
    Poem: 40388761 - Six Seasons In India (In Senryu Series.)
    Member: Dr.tony Brahmin
    Comment: A great description of all the seasons as it presents itself in india and your reflections.... and at the end.... winter. cold except the heart...... like this poem very much my dear poet. tony
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