Saturday, 4 October 2014

SIX SEASONS IN INDIA ( in senryu series.)


SIX SEASONS IN INDIA ( in senryu series.)

 Spring
Love in the air 
Festivals galore 

 Summer
Blazing hot
Except thoughts

 Monsoon-rains 
Few harvest
Rest going in drains. 

 Autumn
Golden, yellow, brown layers 
Naked and bare. 

 Fall 
Death and decay 
Of fiery brilliance 

 Winter
Icy cold
Everything but heart 
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  1. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:20

    Anupama Sarkar 5:27pm Oct 4
    Quite impressive...definition of seasons.. looking forward to Winter .Icy Cold. Everything but heart :)

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:20

    Shaista Irshad 6:29pm Oct 4
    Fabulous

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:21

    Aniruddha Sastikar 6:41pm Oct 4
    Brilliant!

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:23

    Santosh Bakaya 5:07pm Oct 4
    great!

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:23

    Mou Sircar 5:17pm Oct 4
    Wah ... U described well all the weather Tribhawan Kaul ji!

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  6. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:24

    Surinder Kumar Tikoo 5:20pm Oct 4
    A unique description of the seasons Kaul Sahib.

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:25

    Ampat Koshy 5:56pm Oct 4
    Good

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:26

    Santosh Bakaya 5:59pm Oct 4
    Very well described seasons kaul sahab

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  9. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:27

    Jeetesh Vaishya 7:54pm Oct 4
    bahot achchha :)

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  10. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:28

    Narsa Goud 8:23pm Oct 4
    Beautiful

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  11. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:54

    Electric Peace
    Very well written with elegant phrasing and an easy, melodic flow

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  12. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:55

    RAJ NANDY
    Well composed poem Sir ! Unfortunately here in Delhi, I only get to see terrible Summer and only two months of Winter! Rain is only a passing show! Even now the sun is very hot outside! Thanks, -Raj

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  13. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 08:56

    Igneo
    Wonderful.

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  14. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 09:00

    Gajanan Mishra (10/4/2014 1:38:00 AM)
    everything but heart, good writing, thanks

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  15. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 09:00

    Valsa George (10/4/2014 7:17:00 AM)
    Succinct and beautiful depiction of seasons! I liked winter the best!

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  16. Tribhawan Kaul4 October 2014 at 09:05

    Heather Burns 9:03pm Oct 4
    nice series Tribhawan

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  17. Tribhawan Kaul5 October 2014 at 08:35

    Nazre Imam 10:26pm Oct 4
    Tribhawan Sir - i always luv to read ur thoughts. Its beautifully penned

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  18. Tribhawan Kaul5 October 2014 at 08:36

    Nalini Priyadarshni 9:57pm Oct 4
    Very nice

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  19. Tribhawan Kaul6 October 2014 at 10:02

    Sanjeev Dash
    Suppeerr like Sir Ji!!!!

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  20. Tribhawan Kaul6 October 2014 at 10:03

    Majhrul Islam
    Simple and lucid and it flows through me like a patch of cloud white....!!!

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  21. Tribhawan Kaul13 October 2014 at 00:01

    Geetha Jayakumar (10/12/2014 1:33:00 PM)
    Lovely seasons captured in a beautiful way. Loved reading each seasons. Thanks for sharing with us

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  22. Tribhawan Kaul28 October 2014 at 22:39

    Date & Time: 10/24/2014 12:27:00 AM
    Poem: 40388761 - Six Seasons in India (in senryu series.)
    Member: Tajudeen Shah
    Comment: instant flash pictures of nature; seasons, the behavior of nature; the elements variations in environment that influences man and animal alike... even reading is feeling, feeling causes recalling, recalling leads to memories, memories (good or bad) has effects in proportion, all is rightly bound to man's soul. your poem reminds me of varied events of the past. though very economic in nature, enjoyed.

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  23. Tribhawan Kaul22 May 2016 at 10:47

    Date & Time: 5/19/2016 1:52:00 AM
    Poem: 40388761 - Six Seasons In India (In Senryu Series.)
    Member: Dr.tony Brahmin
    Comment: A great description of all the seasons as it presents itself in india and your reflections.... and at the end.... winter. cold except the heart...... like this poem very much my dear poet. tony
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