De novo
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Too far yet visible
amber red sphere
getting submerged
etching, memories of the day
time lost and time gained.
Blue vast canvas
magician’s call
out of hat
rising fireball
a fresh start.
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ReplyDeleteShelleyandra Kapil
Radiant more than a diamond,
Epitome of energy
Unparalleled.....
March 19 at 11:49am
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नीलोफ़र नीलू
ReplyDeleteWooow...!!! So beautiful Tribhawan Kaul saheb😊💐👌
March 19 at 2:16pm
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वसुधा कनुप्रिया
Beautifully penned, Kaul Sir.
March 19 at 6:45pm
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Parupudi Satyavenkatavinodkumar
ReplyDeleteWhat A way to start the Day..... Good Morning Tribhawan Jee......
March 19 at 10:53am
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Sujit Mukherjee
Wonderful, cute poem
March 19 at 10:57am
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Dildar Dehlvi
Beautiful Poetry
March 19 at 11:02am
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Main Hoon Ali
Rising fireball what a beautiful description of the God's vast morning painting
March 19 at 11:16am
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Jai Krishna
Beautiful !
March 19 at 2:38pm
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Adv Dhirendra Srivastava Bipin
Very nice
March 20 at 10:08am
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Kavita Khanna 12:09pm Mar 19
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!!
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Pratima Rakesh
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काश! काश कि ये फ़्रेश स्टार्ट हो पाता !
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