Saturday, 4 March 2017

द्विपदी -13 (Couplet-13)

द्विपदी -13 (Couplet-13)
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 ज़िन्दगी  इ सी जी की बेतरतीबियों से सजे, तो ही अच्छा

सीधी सपाट हो जाए तो पुष्पांजली का  दौर चला आता है।

Zindgi ECG kee betarteebiyon se saje, to hee achcha

Seedhi spat ho jaaye to pushpanjali kaa daur chala aata hai.
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित /त्रिभवन कौल
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6 comments:

  1. Tribhawan Kaul7 March 2017 at 10:05

    Jai Krishna
    Ha..ha..
    Worry not sir,
    By now you must have been accustomed with ECG. At least it gives pleasure of being special one .
    March 4 at 11:35pm
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    Ha ha ha. Don't take it on its face value. Life can be like that only. A poet's perception :)
    March 5 at 10:45pm
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  2. Tribhawan Kaul7 March 2017 at 10:09


    Tapeshwar Prasad
    Wish thee long live dear Sir ....
    Thee are Tribhuwan .... Reigning three worlds
    March 5 at 12:19am
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    Thanks dear _/\_
    March 5 at 10:45pm
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    Ashi Poetess
    Is everything fine sir...???
    March 5 at 9:23am
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    Yeah. Fine. Just a poet's perception of life. :)
    March 5 at 10:46pm
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    Ashi Poetess
    Great!!!
    March 6 at 9:56am
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  3. Tribhawan Kaul8 March 2017 at 01:57

    Chaman Kaul
    Is it that fear of death is engulfing? The moment I took birth ... it is an invitation to death. Why fear.
    March 5 at 10:21am
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    Fear is the key which galvanises us to act. Inaction is as good as being dead. :) Thanks for your philosophical comment. dear brother. :)
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  4. Tribhawan Kaul8 March 2017 at 01:58

    Bhumesh Malla
    क्या लिखूं कुछ समझ नही आया,दो पंक्तियो मे जीवन का फलसफा है।
    March 5 at 11:56am
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    बहुत सही। धन्यवाद भूमेष। :)
    March 5 at 10:48pm
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  5. Tribhawan Kaul8 March 2017 at 01:59

    Pawan Amba
    Sach hai
    March 5 at 5:38pm
    +++
    Tribhawan Kaul
    Great to see you on FB Pawan Ji . :) Dhnyvaad :)
    March 5 at 10:52pm
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    जीवन के इस तथ्य को नकारा नहीं जा सकता कि निष्क्रियता मनुष्य को मृत समान बनाती है। दोस्तों ,इस रचना पर आप सब की पसंद और सराहनीय प्रीतिक्रियाओं के लिए हार्दिक आभार। :)
    March 5 at 11:37pm
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    Ramesh Kaul
    Life is gap between birth and death
    March 5 at 10:59pm
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    True dear RK :)
    March 5 at 11:11pm
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  6. Tribhawan Kaul8 March 2017 at 02:00

    Vijay Kumar Bharteya
    रूकना नही यह जिंदगी है मंजिले' अभी और भी है ' यह रास्ते चलते रहेंगे ठहराव इसमे' और भी है अल्प विराम तो आते रहेंगे पूर्ण विराम इसमे नही ' है '
    March 5 at 11:24pm
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    Tribhawan Kaul
    वाह। सटीक। :)
    March 5 at 11:25pm
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    गुप्ता कुमार सुशील
    वाह.... वाह क्या कहना , आदरणीय जी शानदार प्रस्तुति ... ...जय हो :
    March 6 at 1:20am
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    Om Prakash
    जय हो
    March 6 at 6:51am
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