Wednesday 14 October 2015

दुपदी -8(couplet-8)


दुपदी -8(couplet-8)
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बेवकूफियां जो हुई उन्ही का गम खाए जा रहा है
तेरी बेवफाईयों से दिल भला क्या पायमाल होता?

Bewkoofian jo huin unhee kaa gum khaye jaa raha hai

Teri  bewafayion se dil  bhla kya paayemaal hota ?
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/त्रिभवन कौल

9 comments:

  1. Saira Qureshi
    October 14 at 12:56pm

    bahut Khoob sir Tribhawan Kaul

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  2. Kanchi Singhal
    October 14 at 1:13pm

    Wah

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  3. Shachii Kacker
    October 14 at 1:21pm
    खुब

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  4. Ramkishore Upadhyay
    October 14 at 1:37pm
    वाह

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  5. Surender Gagroo
    October 14 at 1:49pm

    wah wah !

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  6. अकेला इलाहाबादी
    October 14 at 2:58pm

    बहुत ख़ूब। लाज़वाब।

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  7. Sangeeta Yadav 3:10pm Oct 14
    Sundar
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    Vijay Tanna 1:01pm Oct 14
    Waah

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  8. Main Hoon Ali
    October 14 at 11:47pm

    Naya nirala bahot khoob andaz.Waah.

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  9. Rajesh Joshi
    October 14 at 10:01pm

    Waah

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