Sunday 1 December 2013

I am not a poet ?

I am not a poet ?

I am not a poet, mutated in womb
I am not a poet, born with a silver spoon
I am not a poet, left with poetic legacy
I am not a poet, boasting of a dynasty
I am not a poet, honed in workshops
I am not a poet, lined up in bookshops
I am not a poet, dissected in seminars
I am not a poet, enjoy backing of poetic czars.

I write poems, as I feel like expressing
in verses,
my emotions and my feelings
rhythmical or free, I worry not
to the poesy tenets, I stick not
my fault,
being sensitive to ongoing happenings
forth comes creativity in my writings.

Whenever and whatever touches my heart
words take shape in rainbow arch
with different colours and different shades
the form of poetry begins to shake
poetfriends  always encourage me a lot
reading my poetry ,not so hot,
don’t want to be the judge, so let it be
this is so far my poetic journey

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copyright/Children of Lost Gods/2013/Tribhawan Kaul

13 comments:

  1. (via Facebook)
    Syed Mohammad Qasim Wonderful lines Tribhawan Kaul Sahab,Whatever touches my heart,Gets space of in my sacred creative space ,I don't care for anything else,I am here to bask in the glory of HIS grace !
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    Pranesh Nagri Good lines.
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    Narendra Rai Wonderful. . . And what a title of book " Children Of Lost World" wonderful
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  2. .Anupama Dafre True for me too. Thank you for expressing so beautifully and sharing it with me, Tribhawan ji.
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    Jagjit Jit Very true words in a beautiful presentation! my dear friend sir Tribhawan Kaul Ji Thank you
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    Diwakar Pokhriyal lovely
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    Muzzammil Shah You spoke my mind,sir
    Whenever something touches our heart,a new poem gets birth. Lovely write
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  3. Aparna Pathak So true
    Great write!
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    Sreedharan Parokode good lines...
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    Heather Burns Dear friend your poetic journey is amazing All the above might be true but you touch the hearts of your readers. That is what a true poet does. xo
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  4. Abu Horaira Yousafzai lovely innocent verses
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    Aimanu Begum Wonderful expression of the true spirit of a poet.A poet is the ruler of his/her own feelings and expressions.True creativity is not restricted by any predefined condition.Thanks for sharing.
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    Abu Horaira Yousafzai this quality of poetry is God gifted.
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    Aimanu Begum Yes,writing is a god gifted quality.Kaulji rightly says,poets are not honed in some workshops nor are they born out of a legacy.
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  5. Jen Walls Deeply gifted into the breath of life is God's very own poetry! Wonderful dear Tribhawan! OM SHANTI OM
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    Sandra Martyres I can relate to this piece Tribhawanji.. Well said indeed!
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    Himanshu Sahni Very well written
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  6. Shihab K Jamal Go ahead
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    Susana Hazelden Honest and captivating. Beautiful and thought provoking.
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    Hasmukh Mehta nice to feel and nice to write, words to find place to ignite, it is divine grace that reflects in pen and on face
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  7. Tina Ellis 10:48pm Dec 1
    You have a talent I wished I possessed. .great journey

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  8. Charu Dev
    Charu wrote: "Kudos Tribhawan ji, Your well knitted words are re presenting feelings and emotions of each and every heart of the universe. Thanks for sharing such wonderful versed with us......"
    (via facebook on 02-12-2013)

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  9. Spontaneous and sincere, meaningful and thought-provoking.

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  10. (Comments received via Poemhunter.com)
    Date & Time: 12/6/2013 7:38:00 PM
    Poem: 37214140 - I Am Not A Poet?
    Member: Wahab Abdul
    Comment: nice is your poetic journey with good understanding of the craft..you are a poet of socio-political leaning....and as a poet you are tru to your heart as it is stated in this stanza ''I write poems, as I feel like expressing
    in verses,
    my emotions and my feelings
    rhythmical or free, I worry not
    to the poesy tenets, I stick not
    my fault,
    being sensitive to ongoing happenings
    forth comes creativity in my writings....
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    Date & Time: 12/2/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Poem: 37214140 - I Am Not A Poet?
    Member: Pradip Chattopadhyay
    Comment: you reflect the spirit of a poet.
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    Date & Time: 12/1/2013 8:52:00 AM
    Poem: 37214140 - I Am Not A Poet?
    Member: Neela Nath
    Comment: Beautiful verse.Well-constructed and nicely rhymed poem! Kudos!
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    Date & Time: 12/1/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Poem: 37214140 - I Am Not A Poet?
    Member: Valsa George
    Comment: But you are a poet left with a legacy! I stil remember, the first poem I read on your page was a poem written by your father! So you are the poet son of a poet father! I think most of us here don't have any such legacy to boast of! Still we all write to please our fancy! If others are delighted by our writings, it is a bonus! Enjoyed the poem!
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    Date & Time: 12/1/2013 5:26:00 AM
    Poem: 37214140 - I Am Not A Poet?
    Member: Gajanan Mishra
    Comment: who is not a poet my dear?
    Each and everybody is going on poetic journey, good write, thanks.
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  11. Via fb/Pearls and Petals February 2016
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    Pushp Lata
    Too good sir very beautiful "I write poems, as I feel like expressing
    in verses,
    my emotions and my feelings
    rhythmical or free, I worry not
    to the poesy tenets, I stick not
    my fault," like emoticon
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  12. Via fb/Pearls and Petals February 2016
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    DrDamyanti Sharma
    "Whenever and whatever touched my heart
    Words take shape in rainbow arch
    With different colour sand different shades..........."
    Beautiful poem ..........and They are the shades of life........congrats.
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  13. Via fb/Pearls and Petals February 2016
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    Ravi Ranganathan Poem straight from the heart. Liked it immensely.
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    Kameshwari Kulkarni
    Kameshwari Kulkarni
    Suuper!
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    A rant... profound!
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    Shwetabh Pathak
    Wonderful ! Nice thoughts with awesome use of words n feelings.
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