OLDIES – a short story
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Bow..bow…bow…
Browny, the dog in the Sharma’s household was constantly
barking in pain. Their neighbourer Shuklas were cursing the day when Sharmas
shifted into the flat opposite theirs with their old ailing dog.
Rajnarain Shukla tossing in his bed shouted as if to try to
make his voice reach to Sharmas,“what the hell ? I come back from office to
have peace and look I am not allowed even that privilege in our own home. I don’t
know, why people keep pets if they cannot get them treated. Our life has been
made miserable by this dog ever since they shifted in our vicinity.” Sheela,
wife of Rajnarain also made her displeasure known making noises in the kitchen.
“I shall be talking to Sharma first thing tomorrow morning
and also to the secretary of the society.”
“Sure, you should. How long are we going to suffer like this?
Let them shoot the dog to alleviate it from its sufferings.”
In the adjacent room, aged father of Rajnarain who was
suffering from severe bronchitis had started coughing.
Khow…..Khow…..Khow
Bow….Bow….Bow
Khow…..khow…..khow
Raj’s father tried to reach to cough syrup also calling Raj
in the process. Rajnarain first thought to ignore his call but getting
irritated by his father’s constant coughing, he charged into his father’s room.
“Kya Baba, what happened now. Why can’t you take the
medicines yourself ? Neither that dog
nor you allow us some peace after a day’s hectic schedule”, Rajnarain said in
the tone which was short of admonition.
Panting, his father could only show the empty bottle of the
cough syrup and mutter, “ Raj, I told you yesterday…khow..khow…khow….”
“Don’t remind me what I have to do and what I have not. I
shall ask Sheela to make kadha*( an ayurvedic medicinal preparation) for you. Take
that ayurvedic medicine till I bring a
new one. Do you know how much these allopathic medicines cost?” Saying so, he
left the room.
Bow…..bow…boo..bo..b…, the dog’s barking on the other side
was getting little subdued as if the dog had no strength to bark.
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It was 11 pm and half of the families in the society were in
the process of getting into sleep mode when Rajnarain heard the door bell. He
asked his wife to open the door who showed her reluctance by tying her head
with a cloth. He had no option but to get up and open the door. At the door, he
found Sharma’s daughter with a glass.
“What is it now ?” he asked disgustingly as if dog’s barking
was not enough that she had now come to disturb him personally.
“Uncle, Browny is very sick. It has to be given medicine with
milk. The milk is finished in our house. If some milk can be spared….,” before
she could finish the sentence, Sheela shouted from inside,
“no, there is no milk.
Why don’t you people push that old dog out of the house ? Why don’t you call
municipality to take away that dog and kill him.”
“ No, no…aunti. Please don’t say that….please don’t give the
milk but don’t say that…” sharma’s daughter ran back to her flat bursting into
tears.
Khow……khow…khow
Rajnarain’s father staggered out of his room. Seeing his
father Rajnarain got hyper, “kya Baba, why can’t you sit inside the room. Did
you take the kadha?”
His father was still coughing intermittently and trying to
speak, “you know….Raj….kadha does not suit me, Raj….khow..khow…khow….can you
contact my friend ,Doctor Siridharan tomorrow morning .”
“No baba no, I don’t have time tomorrow morning. Take the kadha
and sleep.” He replied and gestured Sheela to make the medicine who was least
interested in doing so. Baba started gasping for breath. Sheela made no attempt
to make her father-in-law to sit on the
chair. She went inside her room beckoning her husband to follow. However Raj caught
hold his father and helping him to his bed asked him curtly to sleep and went
to his room. Rajnarain’s father drank a glass of hot water from the thermos
which soothed her cough a little.
Bow….bow….bow..boooooooo. Browney, the dog again…….
“Do something about that dog,” Sheela asked her husband.
“Yes, I will. Tomorrow morning I shall be going to my friend
in Municipality and ask him to take action.” Rajnarain made her wife
comfortable before going to sleep. For him complaining to the municipality
regarding Browny -the dog was more important than procuring medical aid for his
ailing father from Dr. Sridharan.
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Next day in the morning, Rajnarain opened the door and was
surprised to find some people gathered outside Sharma’s flat. Someone informed
him that Browny had died during the night. He sighed a relief feeling
unburdened of some calamity but could not understand why people were so sad and
mournful. He was about to turn back into his flat when he saw Sharmas coming
out of his flat, holding the garlanded corpse
of Browny in a white cloth followed by his family members including her
daughter who had come to ask for the milk yesterday. The respect and reverence
with which Browny was carried to his grave could not be digested by Sheela and
Rajnarain. They laughed and made fun of Sharmas when some one informed them the
real story behind Sharmas love for Browny.
Browny had been with Sharmas since it was a puppy. It was
bred and treated nicely. Time and again it proved a saviour for the Sharma
family before they had shifted to their new location, the present flat. Once it
had saved Sharma household getting robbed when no one was at home. Another day
it had alerted Sharmas of possible drowning of their daughter and she was saved
in time. It had remained glued to Mrs. Sharma’s bed when
she fell seriously sick as if praying for her well being without taking any
food and water for days together. Everyone thought that because of Browny’s
prayers, Mrs. Sharma got well. Sharmas never forgot its contribution even when
Browny was growing old and getting older thus unable to render any help. They
tended it as best as they could giving it all possible care and treatment even
from the best veterinary doctors available in India.
Rajnarain was rendered speechless. He was thinking of his old
father. Sharmas’ love & care for their old dog and his own indifference
towards his old father made him to sweat
and tremble with unknown guilt. He thought himself to be the murderer of the
dog having refused the milk demanded by that little Sharma girl and now he was
going to commit another murder, that of his own father. He felt ashamed and
Sheela could not meet his eyes too. The mirror images flashed before his eyes
of the days when Baba used to bathe him, take him to school, play with him in
the garden, spend hours at his bed to watch him recover from illness, take
loans for his education and training and always praying for his well being.
Rajnarain felt reeling under the enormous lack of moral and worldly obligations.
He saw no place to hide. He wanted to repent and repent fast. He immediately
rushed out of his house, kicked his scooter and raced to Dr. Siridharan’s
house. He wanted to atone for his omissions and commissions.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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ReplyDeleteNeela N Das Loved the style and the message too.
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ReplyDeleteAtia Imam nice one uncle
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Bhuvanpati Sharma Very we'll written touching story congratulations
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syamala
A touchy one.
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ReplyDeletescsood
Lovely write up.
I really wonder when we could not/can not devote any time from our busy schedule of daily rut to attend to the aged parents, Have we any right to expect the same from our kids, who have more stressful routine than ours?
If they take care of their own it is more than enough.
Any way again it is a subjective prospective and everybody thinks according to his own situations and to expect a similar response from all kids is really a tricky business.
Dear TK,
ReplyDeleteYou have given all the unworthy childern, a food for thought. Hope they will digest the food and make their parents healthy. Old age is heaven,if the childern are angel and it is hell if they are cruel. A very touching story even for a stone hearted. congrats