Monday, 16 December 2013

निर्भया/ Nirbhya

Remembering Nirbhya, a brutalised rape victim on 16th December 2012 in Delhi/India. This poem in hindi is also a part of coming anthology ‘Safeena’ bring brought out by Delhi Poetree  (Poet+tree)

NIRBHYA
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Chatna shoony maansikta ko
Jagrit kar
Mashaal jala
Vileen ho gayi
Panchtavt mein
Anant shoony mein
Jakjor kar anterman ko
Safutit kar nav chetna ko
Chod diya hum sab ko
Chintan aur manthan karne ko
Ek karz laad
chali gayi
kaise utaaren
is soch mein karodon ko duba gayi.
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निर्भया
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चेतना शून्य मानसिकता को
जागृत कर
मशाल जला
विलीन हो गयी
पंचतत्व में
अन्नंत शून्य में
झकझोर कर अंतर्मन को
स्फुटित कर नव चेतना को
छोड़ दिया हम सब को
चिंतन और मंथन करने को
एक क़र्ज़ लाद
चली गयी
कैसे उतारें
इस सोच में करोड़ों को डूबा गयी.
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/त्रिभवन कौल


11 comments:

  1. (via Poets Corner/Facebook/16-12-2913)

    Tina Gulzar BAHUT KHOOB KAUL SIR
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    Rajshekhar Singh Wakai bahoot khoob hai
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    Ritu Kushwah Nice to see you SIR. After long days.

    Ritu Kushwah चिंतन और मंथन करने को
    एक क़र्ज़ लाद SAHI SHABD HE JARURT HE CHINTAN OR MANDHAN KI
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  2. (via facebook/16-12-2013)

    Brahmdeo Bandhu khub
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    Anupama Dafre A beautiful tribute...congratulations, Tribhawan ji.
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    Nirmala Joshi चिंतन और मंथन करने को
    एक क़र्ज़ लद
    चली गई।
    कैसे उतारें
    इस सोच में करोडों को
    डुबा गई ......

    बहुत विचारणीय सुन्दर प्रस्तुति।
    बहुत कुछ सोचने को मजबूर करती हैं ,
    व्यथित करती है ये प्रस्तुति ।
    पता नहीं इंसान में कब जागेगी इंसानियत ।
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    Aimanu Begum It is not only a beautiful tribute but also a call to our almost dead sensibility which needed the sacrifice of a wonderful life to be stirred to activity.
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    Deepak Sharga Ji...Haqiqat..jhakjhorne wali..
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  3. Via poetfreak/16-12-2013

    SnehaSK
    Top class writing, Sir. Nirbhaya had gone through quite a lot - - to be a woman of this country and feel the same terror : may justice be done, and justice will only be done when such atrocities cease. Beautiful writing, Tribhawanji

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  4. Via Poetfreak.com

    nimal p. dunuhinga
    thunder slap to the cowardice flag of Justice?
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    rajeswari
    Dhardh bhari beti ki kahani ankhon me ashru laye..... remembering my writing in Telugu 'NIRBHAYA' and 'GIRL' in English....
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    RAJ NANDY
    A deserving dedication on completion of one full year of the tragic incident on this day , 16th of Dec. A wake up call for the Administration & the Police force alike! –Raj
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    aviisevil
    Great work
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    Catherine E Jarvis
    I don't know how to read Hindi. But I know of the incident. What a horror for the innocent young woman! I'm very interested in hearing if Justice has been done also. For personal reasons.
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  5. एक क़र्ज़ लाद
    चली गयी
    कैसे उतारें
    इस सोच में करोड़ों को डूबा गयी.-------

    bhawuk or prabhawshaali rachna--
    saadar

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  6. aagrah hai mere blog main bhi sammlit hon

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  7. via fb/ कस्तूरी कंचन.16Dec15
    Rashmi Jain 9:19pm Dec 16
    आत्मचिंतन

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  8. Sonia Gupta 9:44am Dec 17
    sunder as usual
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    Ramesh Pawar 5:18am Dec 17
    panchattva mein chetna jab tak panchattva se hoti nahin paar // nav chetna ka tab tak usmey aata nahin ubhaar
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    Jai Krishna 8:38pm Dec 16
    लाजवाब !!
    कवि की संवेदनशीलता को दाद देनी होगी !
    निर्भया का स्मरण उस मानस-पटल पर अद्यतन विद्यमान है, जिसे लोग भूल-से गये थे
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    via fb/The Poetry Society of India/ 16-17 Dec 2015

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  9. via fb/Purple Pen. 16Dec15
    वसुधा कनुप्रिया 11:15pm Dec 16
    Nice tribute

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  10. Date & Time: 6/26/2016 3:40:00 AM
    Poem: 37397151 - Nirbhya
    Member: Rajnish Manga
    Comment: A thought provoking poem based on Nirbhaya tragedy. The following words seek explanation:
    Ek karz laad... chali gayi... kaise utaaren
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