Tuesday, 19 November 2013

A True Lover

A True Lover
I love you
I love you too
says every Mr. A, B and C
to every Ms. E, F and G.

Significance.....few know
Substance........a few care
Semblance ......the few realize

Love is killed at alter of love
an eagle mulls killing a dove.

Acronym of love bares it all
L.....for  lust
O.....for orgasm
V.....for virility
E.....for ecstasy
Any one absent heralds showdown
whites, wheatish, yellows or browns

Affection, concern, longings
caring and sharing
passengers of backseat
bodily attributes only subjects, 
left to treat.

I forbid self to say 
I love you
I rather prefer to say
I miss you.....I miss you
If I truly love you.
All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul
Note : What is True Love ? It will always remain debatable.


  1. Comments on Poetfreak on my poem A True Lover on 19-11-2013
    You have done a realistic analysis of LOVE here Tribhawan ji! Unfortunately, today love is mostly associated with orgasm & sex, so we have our 74 yrs old Asaram Bapu, the fraud holy-man, being tried for raping a girl below 18 yrs of age! Russian literature discovered in his possession said that youth & vigour is retained by having sex with young girls!? He was surprisingly tested virile by the doctors! The responsibility, commitments & mutual respect are difficult to find these days of 'one night stand'! Thanks for sharing, -Raj

  2. NM, Nishu Mathur
    Very interesting read and a question that does perplex..so many emotions in love. Perhaps like Rumi said..I may try to describe it but when I experience it, I am speechless..( something like this :) )

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    avya .(11/19/2013 5:59:00 AM)
    a good one and rightly said that true loving is missing.........One who fills the vacuum in your life is your true love!

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    Pradip Chattopadhyay(11/19/2013 3:24:00 AM)
    as you so truly say, i miss you reflects love's durability while the other is often merely impulsive.

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    Wahab Abdul(11/19/2013 3:01:00 AM)
    this is your best trying in to give variation to poetry structure and style..you are 100 percent successful and i agree with what Valsa Said in her comment...10

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    Valsa George(11/19/2013 2:57:00 AM)
    'I love you' is a statement often said, but never lived! This poem has a unique structure and I thoroughly agree with what you have tried to express here! Enjoyed this meaningful write! !