Saturday, 13 December 2014

रात भर सोता रहा अल्फाज़ की चादर लपेटे


रात भर सोता रहा अल्फाज़ की चादर लपेटे
सुबह उठा तो एक नज़्म का दीदार हो गया.
Raat bhar sota raha alfaz kee chaardar lapete
Subh uttha to ek nazm kaa deedaar ho gaya.
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सर्वाधिकार सुरक्षित/त्रिभवन कौल
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16 comments:

  1. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 22:53

    Evelyn Eli-Gaikwad 6:04pm Dec 13
    Laajawab...one of the most beautiful couplets I've ever heard or read...

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 22:55

    via fb/PAU

    Sakina Minhaj Shikari 6:19am Dec 14
    WAHHH!!

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    Monica Oswal 10:13pm Dec 13
    वाह
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    Shailesh Gupta 8:21pm Dec 13
    vaah....behad umda....

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 22:58

    Ramkishore Upadhyay 6:13pm Dec 13
    अद्भुत रचना

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 22:59

    Sakhi Singh 12:03am Dec 14
    waah

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:05

    Rajesh Kummar Sinha 11:29pm Dec 13
    बहुत ही उम्दा
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    Vijay Tanna 10:56pm Dec 13
    Waah
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    Parul Rastogi 7:59pm Dec 13
    Sundar!
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    Chhaya Thorat 5:59pm Dec 13
    वो कौन सी गली थी जिसमेँ रातभर ठहर गए थे...
    भोर होते ही रूहानी सपने जाने कहाँ बिखर गए है...
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    Naim Khan 5:14pm Dec 13
    bahut umda

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    Rahul Ahuja 4:34pm Dec 13
    Khoob

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  6. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:14

    Facebook Dec 13 at 11:07 PM

    Promilla Qazi commented on your status.
    Promilla wrote: "waah, badiya sir:)"

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:19

    Amit Dahiyabadshah 9:31pm Dec 13
    Khoob
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    Charu Dev 7:10pm Dec 13
    Bahaut Khub.....
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    Abhilasha Sharma 5:19pm Dec 13
    Subhaan allah

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:23

    Main Hoon Ali 9:21pm Dec 13
    Subah uthne par deedar hua unko / Pata nahi raat bhar chadar me lapete kya krte rahe woh....
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    Nisha Suresh 4:46pm Dec 13
    Khoobsurat nazm...
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    Avikal Shukla 4:23pm Dec 13
    Aur hme aapke is post se
    Pyaar ho gye

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  9. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:28

    Facebook Dec 13 at 9:10 PM
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    me
    Rashmi Sinha commented on your status.
    Rashmi wrote: "क्या बात है। खूब कही।"

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  10. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:29

    Facebook Dec 13 at 8:32 PM
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    me
    Abhishek wrote: "wah sir....bahut khoob...kaise hai aap?" - Reply to this email to comment on this status.
    facebook

    Abhishek Dua commented on your status.
    Abhishek wrote: "wah sir....bahut khoob...kaise hai aap?"

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  11. Tribhawan Kaul13 December 2014 at 23:34

    Vinay Kumar 4:33pm Dec 13
    बहुत अच्छा

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  12. Tribhawan Kaul15 December 2014 at 06:53

    Facebook Today at 6:47 PM
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    me
    Uddhav wrote: "बहुत खूब मा०|"
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    Aparna Pathak
    Kya baat !
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  13. Tribhawan Kaul15 December 2014 at 06:55

    Hari1941 Yesterday, 19:55
    Yes aksar sahi alfaz nahi milte. If giving words to our was easy, all of us would have been a poet like you. Very good couplet. I think Guljar Saheb will love it.

    via fb/verdurez.

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  14. Tribhawan Kaul17 December 2014 at 05:21

    savi0301 16 Dec 12
    Dear TK
    तारीफ़ करूँ क्या आपकी अल्फ़ाज़ नहीं मिलते
    अल्फ़ाज़ मिल भी जाये गर अंदाज़ नहीं मिलते
    खूबसूरत लफ्जो मे बयां कर जाते है आप जो
    आप जैसे शायर बार बार नहीं मिलते

    nice couplet enjoyed.....

    via verdurez

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  15. मेरा अव्यक्त --राम किशोर उपाध्याय8 January 2017 at 07:37

    अति सुन्दर

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