Wednesday 25 June 2014

A Simple poem :- Poems

A simple poem :- Poems
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Poems are like flowers
Seed sowed in the mind
Inked through heart
Flowering in different ways
In themes, essence and shapes
Catering for creative minds
Direct, indirect,
From the heart or intellect
Soulful or poignant
A loner’s lament,
A lover’s moan
A soulful tone
A happy reunion
A false illusion
A thought divine
A visit to shrine
A solitary pain
A wife’s disdain
A dreamer’s dream
A heart’s scream
A love profound
A trust abound
A soldier’s sacrifice
A pet’s demise
A mother’s love
A poet’s dove
Anything you name it
A poem will tame it
Fractured texture
Or with a rhyme
Under the shelter of vast universe  
When words begin to shine
Luring every creative mind
Like a bee to nectar
Extracting honey of its own kind.
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul

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  1. Tribhawan Kaul25 June 2014 at 07:52


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    Loveky write sir.!!
    6 hours ago by Mr. Frivolous
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    Sandra Martyres
    A wonderful write Tribhawanji, you bring out the essence of poetry
    6 hours ago by Sandra Martyres
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    Kaila George
    Oh my this is just wonderful....beautiful to read ... lovely sir.
    5 hours ago by Kaila George
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    Stella Armour
    This is so true.. lovely words..
    4 hours ago by Stella Armour
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    RAJ NANDY
    Very well composed Tribhawan ji ! You have gracefully covered all aspects about the poet's mind and true Poetry! Recommended by me,- a senior Member of this site! Thanks, -Raj
    4 hours ago by RAJ NANDY
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    Ashley Erb
    Nice
    4 hours ago by Ashley Erb
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    nimal dunuhinga
    simply I entered to the garden
    1 hour ago by nimal dunuhinga
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    Karin Anderson
    I agree this is just wonderful and it flows down the page with such creativity and truth. I have read it three times and each time it was a pleasure to read.
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    Olli Zozo
    wonderful!
    1 hour ago by Olli Zozo
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  2. DIWAKAR25 June 2014 at 08:09

    Very True Sir :-) Nice poem :-)

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul28 June 2014 at 03:21

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    This is beautifully written, Tribhawan ji.
    26 Jun by Sneha SK
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    eleanor prince
    beautifully written and great closing lines - especially appreciate: 'Seed sowed in the mind Inked through heart Flowering in different ways'

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul28 June 2014 at 03:25

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    Valsa George (6/26/2014 11:04:00 PM)
    Any thing under the sun can make a topic for a poem and you have chosen some of the pet themes of most of the poets. I t is rendered in a capturing way...! Enjoyed the beauty of this narration!
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    S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/26/2014 1:55:00 AM)
    Ah a marvelous poem on the various poems n themes of difrent human poets. Creative wonderful!
    And wow sir u were born on New yrs day.! Great day great poet.
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    Neela Nath (6/25/2014 2:12:00 AM)
    Really, poems are store-house of various emotive actions.Very beautifully written

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul14 July 2014 at 03:22


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    Babu Jun 28
    Poem is very simple but covers many things.
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    VAS Jun 29
    My dearest poet TK,
    A simple poem from simple TK.
    Right from child hood human like poem and music.
    Simple poem from villagers get a place in our heart and activate our nerves.
    Simple poems and simple men like you and me are liked by one and all.
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    savi0301 Jul 1
    nice simple poem dear TK, straight from the heart on the paper, but life is not that simple nor the people, yet a simple poem touches the heart, thanx for the simplicity in todays otherwise complex world.












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  6. Tribhawan Kaul28 June 2017 at 09:20

    via fb/TL in the month of June 2017
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    Rajesh Srivastava
    very nice . well defined what's a poetry
    June 25 at 10:26pm
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    Ravi Sharma
    Ravi Sharma
    V.nice
    June 25 at 11:53pm
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    वसुधा कनुप्रिया
    Lovely
    June 26 at 6:20pm
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  7. Tribhawan Kaul28 June 2017 at 09:32

    Yasmeen Khan
    सुन्दर
    June 26 at 9:27pm
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    डॉ किरण मिश्रा
    Nice thoughts
    June 27 at 5:31pm
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    Deepak Deep
    बेहद खूबसूरत आदरणीय
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