Father dear father. (Father’s day special)
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Standing tall at the horizon
with an aura around
Wrapped in the mind emotions
abound
Eyes talk but not the lips
Pain and laughter take the
dip
Watching the waves touch and
go
Children get blessed when he
bestows
Tending the future with
utmost care
Not the one who would share
The pain.
Absence of rustling of
leaves
Sportingly watching a broken
tree
Branches scattered or blown
away
Seeds carried far away
Love and affection now much
in demand
Never felt let down, still
in command
Satisfied he feels and
laughs at the time
Conquering smile is
noble and is sublime
Payback ! Can’t think but
just a prayer
Should father me in next
life, if GOD cares.
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ReplyDeleteShaista Irshad
That's is a wonderful n awesome sketch... Loved it
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Driftwood Ashore
Wonderful!
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ReplyDeleteRamkishore Upadhyay Satisfied he feels and laughs at the time
Conquering smile is noble and is sublime
Payback ! Can’t think but just a prayer
Should father me in next life, if GOD cares.--बहुत सुन्दर कविता ,,,की पंक्तियाँ ..बधाई हो
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ReplyDeleteSuperb tribute to your father and to all fathers
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ReplyDeleteAparna Pathak Awesome. ..I feel so good to read your poems on every current day or event. .u never miss any...thanks for sharing
Aanchal Kabeer
Beautiful
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Nazre Imam
Its beautiful..
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Yaseen Anwer
beautifully penned
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Neelamani Sutar
Wonderful!
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Babu
ReplyDeleteFather is Guru personified.
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syamala
Yes, father's affection is sublime ans subtle, especially in our generation. He is always the role model of children. Takes care of them in every way. Does not over praise them but at the same time feels proud when they achieve. Love is the same even if they achieve or not. Takes them into his bosom giving them a confidence that he is there always for them.
So, it is surprise lunch for you today. You also must be smiling (even if you know where they are taking you you would pretend as if you do not know!)
Out of context.....
My son used to give me a birthday card. It was I who took him to Archies, pretend I am not watching what card he is selecting and it is me who paid the bill. When he gives me the birthday card on my birthday I used to pretend what picture the card has, make all kinds of wild guesses. He used to shout "It is butterflies! I know you like colourful butterflies!" and give me the card with wishes.
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Nitin Soni Awesome!
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Pooja Dubey Happy father's day
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Jen Walls Wonderful! Happy Father's day and joyful moments all!
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Aparna Pathak Happy father's day !
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Sandra Martyres Happy Fathers Day tribhawanji
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Abdul Wahab very good .,
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Heather Burns great thoughts
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Floy Dy Ra
ReplyDeleteA very special "father´s day" that sounds of the love he gives an universal sounding to listen with our inner eyes
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A beautiful reiteration, Tribhawan ji.
ReplyDelete18 Jun by Sneha SK to Father dear father
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Touching words in dedication...great Father's Day poem
17 Jun by Kesav Easwaran to Father dear father
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A GREAT DEDICATION FOR THE FATHER'S DAY TRIBHAWAN Ji ! You have posted after a long time as I can see ! Best wishes, take care, -Raj
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ReplyDeleteGeetha Jayakumar (6/20/2014 7:54:00 AM)
A wonderful tribute to father...With many captivating lines...
Payback! Can't think but just a prayer
Should father me in next life, if GOD cares....
Thanks for sharing with us this lovely poem...
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Valsa George (6/17/2014 7:58:00 AM)
Can't think but just a prayer
Should father me in next life, if GOD cares
The greatest acknowledgement, a son can ever give to his father! A great tribute to your father and all fathers around the globe!
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Shahzia Batool (6/17/2014 6:41:00 AM)
A special poem on a special relation of life, written in a universal ink, along with all those common, similar characteristics identified in all fathers...yes, we can't pay him back all the favors he bestows on us...fathers day and mothers day write ups are so special that i wish everybody should read, especially those who have the blessing and pleasure of their company in their lives, just to learn not to misbehave with them or not to speak aloud in front of them...a very strong fathers' day poem this one is!
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S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/17/2014 6:30:00 AM)
An impressive poem on father's day in fab metaphors too. Thumbs up sir.
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Pheko Motaung (6/14/2014 6:57:00 AM)
As a father I am very happy for you dedicated this wonderful poem to us fathers.Thank you very much
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/28/2014 3:25:00 AM)
ReplyDeleteFather there is no comparison to this word and its position. Father dear father a nice poem.
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Comment: A nice tribute to Father.'Father'- -this word is to me affection and care incarnate.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/30/2014 1:40:00 AM)
ReplyDeletean outstanding tribute to the dearest friend in life. the last two lines remain etched in mind
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