The Woman
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This world is, because of
the woman
this universe is, because of
the woman
nothing exists without the
woman
our existence is, because of
the woman.
Why being a woman
then
should be humiliation ?
Why a woman
then
should face indignation ?
Always, the woman becomes
the prey... ?
Always, the woman has no
say.....?
The woman is a mother, also
a mother–in-law
the woman is a sister ,also
a sister-in-law
the woman has many roles to
play
a daughter-in-law perfects
that night & day.
In the woman, power is
manifest,
yet she is unaware and that
is a jest.
She becomes Durga when in
rage
making a statement, she is
no sage.
Existence of the woman
defines the awakening
crematoriums everywhere, her
absence creating
indebted to her for bringing us to light
yet for survival, she has to
fight.
Take a bow men, she is
supreme
without her, life can never
be a dream.
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Pradiptakumar Mohanty A beautiful piece of poetry...Indeed , worthy write...kudos...
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Sandra Martyres Thanks Tribhawanji.... It is heartening to read messages like this especially in our country.
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Mrittika Das extreme truth..
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ReplyDeleteIf you can't stay away from them, just join them. It is better to win some, and lose some.
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ReplyDeleteNarendra Rai Wonderfully penned. . . So true. . . Each line is powerful , love it. . . Wonderful tribute to women. . .
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Floy Dy Ra ...women are the better men
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A Good tribute to 'the woman' on the International Women's Day. Indeed she is the creator, sustainer and the destroyer. She has the power in herself. Present slogan of 'Women Empowerment' as such has no meaning at all. But, one should also remember that Ramayana and Mahabharath are both because of her. But, without her nothing is complete in the living beings !
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ReplyDeleteDear TK,
Mind blowing and fitting tribute by TribhawanKaul to wonderful woMAN on woMENs day.
We enjoy our life with wife and life will be grief without her.
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ReplyDeleteGlowing tributes to womanhood by you.
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Dear TK,
a wonderful poem on Womens day, wonderfully written, each and every word so meaningful, you are such a wonderful great poet
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ReplyDeleteLalitha Iyer •
ALL KIND AND COMPASSIONATE BEINGS ARE ALWAYS FRAGILE, WEAK AND SOFT AND DELICATE AND ALL THINGS OF BEAUTY ARE ALWAYS BEING ATTRACTED TO DISTRACTION AND TO THEIR DESTRUCTION OR PRESERVATION DEPENDING UPON THE POSSESSIVE NATURE OF THE TAKER..................WOMEN IS DEFEATED BECAUSE OF HER LOVELY AND KIND EMOTIONS, BECAUSE OF HER SOFT NATURE...................COMPARED TO INDIAN WOMEN FOREIGN WOMEN ARE U C MORE STRONG AND STERN, SINCE THEY HAVE CONTROL OVER THEIR SOFT EMOTIONS AND THEIR ATTITUDE TOWARDS BODY IS DIFFERENT ...............WE ALWAYS THINK US AS SHADOWS OF MEN.............IN ONE WAY OR OTHER....................SLAVISHNESS IS DEEP ROOTED IN EVEN THE SONGS OF TODAY.............THE FILMS ALL SLAVISH......................OUR CHARACTER HAS TO BE MODIFIED.............WE ARE ATTACHING TOO MUCH IMPORTANCE TO SILLY DRESS MATERIALS AND OUR APPARENT BEAUTIES THAT OUR BRAINS ARE SILLY STUFF MADE...................WE SHOULD LEARN A LOT OF LIFE CHARACTER AND LIFE COURAGE FROM EVEN THE ORDINARY.........(I BEG YOUR PARDON) FOREIGN WOMEN.............................THEY DONT SHY OR FEEL SELF CONSCIOUS LIKE US FOR EVERY LITTLE THING..................WE ARE LIKE HERDS DRIVEN BY A STICK..........................................JUST TO MATCH THE SOCIETY'S MAIN GO...........................................
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ReplyDeleteTribhawan Kaul I can not but agree with you Ms. Lalitha Iyer, however I feel Indian women is coming of age. She is now more assertive, more awakened, more participative and more courageous. Change is there to see and observe in every sphere of life whereever there is presence of a woman and this change will remian a continuing process. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Date & Time: 6/14/2017 12:33:00 AM
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Poem: 27107618 - The Women
Member: Bharati Nayak
Comment: Why then a woman does
torture another woman?
Why does a ma-in-law
torches a daughter in-law?
Why does a woman destroy another’s world?
Why does jealousy overcomes a sister-in-law?
- - - - - - - -A nice poem exposing the maladies of our social system. Everyday we read news about torture of daughter-in laws by mother-in-laws in India. Sometimes it is vice versa.Unless mother-in-law gets the support of son and her husband she may not dare to do so.Such news of torture of women depress me like anything.
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Date & Time: 6/15/2017 12:24:00 AM
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Poem: 27107618 - The Women
Member: Tribhawan Kaul
Comment: Thank you Bharati. It is so nice of you to have visited my poem and leave an insightful comment. Yes, I agree, in every case Ma-in- law can not be blamed. Happy reading and writing.