Wednesday 16 October 2013

Truthfulness

Truthfulness
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 Allow the dreams to make castles in the air
Truth always bare the truth behind a ruse
How much illusions try to circumvent
Rainbows always have the last laugh
After clouds bring rains and deluge.
Peeping into self, awakens and
Zero gets power to bounce
Shaping path of its own
And goals to achieve
Hitting bulls eye
Truth trounce
Falsehood
Ultimately.  
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul

5 comments:

  1. this is called a composition...meaningful phrases and lines!
    a nice read Tribhawan Kaul ji...

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  2. Thank you Diwakar and Shahzia. It is so nice of you.

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    Date & Time: 10/17/2013 11:09:00 PM
    Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
    Member: Valsa George
    Comment: At the end Truth triumphs over falsehood... Let that be the truth! A beautiful poem unravelling a great truth and structured in a unique pattern! !
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    Date & Time: 10/17/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
    Member: Wahab Abdul
    Comment: truth trounces falsehood ultimately......this is ultimate truth...wonderful..10
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    Date & Time: 10/16/2013 2:31:00 AM
    Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
    Member: Gajanan Mishra
    Comment: falsehood ultimately, good write, thanks.
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    Date & Time: 10/16/2013 2:27:00 AM
    Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
    Member: Pradip Chattopadhyay
    Comment: it surely does, it's so destined.
    a well-structured lovely poem.
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    Date & Time: 10/20/2013 5:30:00 AM
    Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
    Member: Queeny Gona
    Comment: Truth sets a person free.... Sometimes falsehood seems to be upperhand yet ultimately truth triumphs!

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