Truthfulness
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Allow the dreams to make castles in the air
Truth always bare the truth behind a ruse
How much illusions try to circumvent
Rainbows always have the last laugh
After clouds bring rains and deluge.
Peeping into self, awakens and
Zero gets power to bounce
Shaping path of its own
And goals to achieve
Hitting bulls eye
Truth trounce
Falsehood
Ultimately.
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rights reserved/Tribhawan Kaul
Beautiful :-)
ReplyDeletethis is called a composition...meaningful phrases and lines!
ReplyDeletea nice read Tribhawan Kaul ji...
Thank you Diwakar and Shahzia. It is so nice of you.
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ReplyDeleteDate & Time: 10/17/2013 11:09:00 PM
Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
Member: Valsa George
Comment: At the end Truth triumphs over falsehood... Let that be the truth! A beautiful poem unravelling a great truth and structured in a unique pattern! !
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Date & Time: 10/17/2013 2:11:00 PM
Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
Member: Wahab Abdul
Comment: truth trounces falsehood ultimately......this is ultimate truth...wonderful..10
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Date & Time: 10/16/2013 2:31:00 AM
Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
Member: Gajanan Mishra
Comment: falsehood ultimately, good write, thanks.
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Date & Time: 10/16/2013 2:27:00 AM
Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
Member: Pradip Chattopadhyay
Comment: it surely does, it's so destined.
a well-structured lovely poem.
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ReplyDeleteDate & Time: 10/20/2013 5:30:00 AM
Poem: 36714856 - Truthfulness
Member: Queeny Gona
Comment: Truth sets a person free.... Sometimes falsehood seems to be upperhand yet ultimately truth triumphs!