The Martyr
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Lotus
blooms only in mud
bleeding
wounds do give solace
colour,
caste, religion matter not
flag of
pride and ownership do.
Nectar and
poison drawn
from
churning a rouge entity,
for
everyone to reap
gruff of a
lion is enough for sheep
yet clever
is fox in numerous garbs.
Poison of
hatred everywhere
drink like
Neelkantha*,spare the nectar
for those,
who need it the most
heaven is
hidden somewhere there
raise the
bar there is nothing to fear
your body
may be consigned to flames
But not
YOU, never ever.
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All rights reserved/Tribhawan
Kaul
*Hindu
religious scriptures (mainly Shiv Puran) say that during the great churning of
sea by Gods and Demons, nectar and poison both were produced . None was
prepared to consume poison (Halahal) but that had to be consumed otherwise that
would have made entire sea poisonous. So Lord Shiva took the poison for the benefit of all but did not swallow it
and kept it in his throat making his entire neck bluish . The Lord since then
came to be known as ‘Neel Kantha ‘ ( Having Blue coloured throat) also.
A martyr is also like Lord Shiva who gulps down/ embraces the
poison of Martyrdom so that people of his/her land of his/her country remain
safe. Enemy country is like a sheep which dare not take on direct confrontation
but send terrorists who come in various disguises. These terrorists sometimes
succeed in their misadventures succeeding in killing brave soldiers fighting
for their motherland.
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ReplyDeleteInas Essa
Very well written, thanks for sharing.
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Valsa George
Yes, someone has to be the saviour or martyr for others to live in peace! When we undertake some sacrifice for the commmon good, much of our comforts and even our existence may be in peril, but the inner entity in us will be enriched. Here I am reminded of Mahathmaji! A great narration with a lofty theme! !
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Wahab Abdul
this poem of yours is different from rest of your poems...in narration, in styles and tones...plot quite good...use of language is modern too....movement of thoughts quite praise worthy...it's a great successful poetry! Kudos to you..love it 10
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Ramesh Rai
A great write sir. Lord Shiva consumed poison, so he is Mahadev. in one of my poem THE PAINS OF A POET i have written the matter.so far about the title concern n first two stanza, it gives an universal message to lead the life being free from all inferior complexities. lotus blooms in mud xactly rose blooms in thorn. a good definition of martyr is composed here. loved your ink.
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Abhishek Kumar
Informative poem with a great message...liked it: -)
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Deepak Sawhney
A good free flowing poem with a great message. However, you may wish to focus a little on the technical aspect on the format of 4,5,7 lines in stanzas. Rhyme or free flow is your personal choice.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
colour, caste, religion matter not
flag of pride and ownership do.
finest way to sum up a profound truth, mostly ignored!
a great poem indeed.
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Lucifera Santez
well written,
loved it.
:)
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Neela Nathdas
I know the story, but never read in such a beautiful form.
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Bharti Chandwani
beautiful poem..........inspirational, ethical n touch of epics...wonderful.
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Queeny Gona
Wonderful write dear Sir. Tunnelled the depths of epics..
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ReplyDeleteMuzzammil Shah
Simply great lines on martyr.
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Shahzia Batool
martyr does not die eternal death...your writing is with a spiritual touch i have a good reason to feel familiar with!
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Mrittika Das
simply great
Today at 3:55 PM
ReplyDeleteInteresting ! Once the link opened , I read the earlier blogs too. Sir you have a lucid style, easy on the eye, yet profound.
regards
Rohini
(via e-mail dt.10-10-2013)
Amit Dahiyabadshah Ohhh Tribhuwan Kaul You have just produced your finest lines yet. Waah!
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