Sunday 18 January 2015

Nano Poetry-3

Nano Poetry-3
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Dilemma
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If you read my lips
It says go
If you feel my heart
It  says no.
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Ego
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Silence, she does not break
Pretence I do not shed
Love  becomes  casualty
Hearts remain unread.
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Life
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Sand squeezed in hand
Slipping involuntarily
Merging with sand,
Ultimately.
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17 comments:

  1. Soumya Mohanty Vilekar 9:39pm Jan 18
    beautiful compilation of micropoetries
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    Sanchita Srivastava 9:30pm Jan 18
    good read
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    Aparna Pathak 9:28pm Jan 18
    Good one

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  2. Nitin Soni 9:51am Jan 19
    Too good.
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    Meetu Kapur 7:42am Jan 19
    Truth of life. ...penned perfectly
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    Neha R. Krishna 3:51am Jan 19
    Wonderful write...

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  3. Pratik Kanjilal 4:21pm Jan 19
    Excellent thought. (Y)
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    Sudha Chowdhry 9:48am Jan 19
    What beautiful & precise expression !!!! Life sandwiched between Ego and Dilemma 'slipping involuntarily through fingers ' No Gain no Loss'. Ultimate story !!
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    Nikita Sharma 10:00pm Jan 18
    Nice!

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  4. Lagna Pany 11:05pm Jan 18
    Wonderful! All three of them, but I liked the Life most!
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    Arghya Dey 8:44pm Jan 18
    all three are beautiful.
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    Tapeshwar Prasad 8:44pm Jan 18
    The truth slipping by ....

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  5. Biswajit Tripathy 7:07am Jan 19
    wah, awesome lines. loved each of them
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    Reena Prasad 6:43am Jan 19
    lovely
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    Aji John 12:57am Jan 19
    heavenly. i loved all of it.

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  6. Rahul Ahuja 8:36pm Jan 18
    Amazing

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  7. Abhilasha Sharma 9:22pm Jan 18
    Nice

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  8. Shailesh Gupta 12:04pm Jan 20
    nice...each composition...:)
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    Anupama Sarkar 7:22pm Jan 19
    Really good

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  9. Neeti Banga 9:21pm Jan 19
    Amazing and insightful!

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  10. Sandra Martyres 10:15pm Jan 19
    I enjoyed reading these Nano poems. Must try out a few myself

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  11. Nazre Imam 7:20pm Jan 19
    Superb..
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    Shailesh Gupta 4:19pm Jan 19
    very beautiful...

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  12. Kaur Rinky 6:42am Jan 21
    wow

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  13. scsood Jan 19
    the gems of nano poetry from Tribhawan Kaul. Sincere appreciation for making my day

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  14. Babu Jan 19
    Very nice, short and sweet Nano Poems by TK.

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  15. muthurajan Jan 20
    It is Nano time everywhere! Very Nice!

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  16. savi0301 Jan 21
    Dear TK,
    Nano poetry, just read and liked it, felt like the crispy taste of potato chips, very crispy, very very sweet.......

    the smallest car
    Nano the car very small
    yet can take you very far
    never knew our wonderful
    TK will give us smallest poem
    short crispy but deep in fathom
    looking forward to many more nano poems from you
    the car Nano made people look back again
    your nano poems prompts reader to read them again

    can only say

    सतसइया के दोहरे ज्यू नाविक के तीर
    देखन मे छोटे लगे घाव करे गम्भीर

    The rough translation is: The poet Satsaya couplet's are like the arrows of sailor. Looks small in size but causes serious injury

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  17. Hari1941 Yesterday, 19:08
    Life ------
    Sand squeezed in hand
    Slipping involuntarily
    Merging with sand,
    Ultimately.

    The inevitable so philosophically summarized.

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