Tuesday, 6 January 2015

Nano Poetry-2




Nano Poetry-2
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Selfless
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Reduced to a wax dot
Still a candle stands tall
Giving itself away
In a selfless way.
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Freedom
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Flock of birds migrating
Crossing boundaries after boundaries
Territories after territories,
unhindered
But marked by humans,
For the humans
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HIS Grace
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I would have lost my way
In labyrinth of crossroads
Thank God and my fate
The path I tread
Is simple and straight.
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21 comments:

  1. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:13

    Ankush Bakshi 7:35pm Jan 6
    Exceptional...

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:14

    Soumya Mohanty Vilekar 8:02pm Jan 6
    the truth of life in micro presentation.

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:14

    Nitin Soni 8:04pm Jan 6
    Beautiful

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:15

    Nazre Imam 8:22pm Jan 6
    Nice thought Tribhawan sir..

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:16

    Neha R. Krishna 8:28pm Jan 6
    Thoughtful write...

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  6. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:17

    Vinay Kumar Singh 9:51pm Jan 6
    Lovely

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul6 January 2015 at 09:31

    Ramkishore Upadhyay 7:31pm Jan 6
    The path I tread
    Is simple and straight.. how simply you tread the complex path of poetry...congrates Sir..

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:29

    Driftwood Ashore 12:34am Jan 7
    Bravo sirjee

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  9. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:29

    Abhik Shome 1:04am Jan 7
    An engaging read, indeed.

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  10. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:30

    Parul Rastogi 12:51am Jan 7
    Beautiful thoughts!

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  11. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:31

    Rahul Ahuja 1:21am Jan 7
    Wonderful

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  12. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:32

    Sadia Khan 2:10am Jan 7
    This is wonderful!!

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  13. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:34

    Madan Gandhi 9:04am Jan 7
    beautiful

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  14. Tribhawan Kaul7 January 2015 at 02:35


    Jay Gandhi 9:30am Jan 7
    The first two poems have been nicely expressed. The third one falls a bit flat because it reads like a prayer more than a poem. I understand I may not be well qualified to make that comment but that is what I felt. In my opinion the 2nd poem is the best! Good job Tribhawan Kaul

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  15. Tribhawan Kaul8 January 2015 at 06:49

    Nida Aftab 4:39pm Jan 7
    beautiful !

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  16. Tribhawan Kaul8 January 2015 at 06:51

    Lagna Pany 9:38pm Jan 7
    Love it!

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  17. Tribhawan Kaul8 January 2015 at 06:52

    Jen Walls 11:56am Jan 8
    Beautiful and uplifting!

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  18. Tribhawan Kaul10 January 2015 at 06:32

    Heather Burns 11:03pm Jan 8
    lovely thoughts

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  19. Tribhawan Kaul10 January 2015 at 06:36

    Pinakini Naik 3:17pm Jan 10
    Beautiful!!!! ♥
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    Sangeeta Talwar Suneja 3:12pm Jan 10
    His grace, the selfless and the freedom, lovely and large poetry! Tribhawan ji! :-) it is in no way Nano! :-)
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    Shailesh Gupta 2:15pm Jan 10
    excellent...
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    Nalini Priyadarshni 8:44pm Jan 9
    Fine pieces.

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  20. Tribhawan Kaul11 January 2015 at 22:14

    Bobby Bains 3:46pm Jan 11
    Superb
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    Pinakini Naik 3:17pm Jan 10
    Beautiful!!!! ♥

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  21. Tribhawan Kaul13 January 2015 at 08:49

    Kalpana Shah 5:54pm Jan 13
    Beautiful! All are well penned
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    Sarala Ram Kamal 12:52pm Jan 13
    wow enjoyed them alll.. I love such short ones :)
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    Sarbjit Singh 1:10pm Jan 12
    Nice, Short and crisp

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