Thursday, 17 July 2014

Peace at work

Peace at work
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Understanding and love make peace work
Human DNA though cannot be banked upon
War mongers keep selling their wares
Will to survive too dares hawks to strike
Fire unable to differentiate
Hate taking over the senses
Visible become the scars on humanity
Yet dawn doesn’t wait for darkness to flee
Love makes survival a better option
Understanding paves the way for smooth transition
War becomes the casualty, peace rejoice and fly
Like a dove flees from the cage of inhibitions
To soar in the vast sky.
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9 comments:

  1. Tribhawan Kaul18 July 2014 at 03:52

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    Yet dawn doesn’t wait for darkness to flee...................Great! When man sees a man?
    17 Jul by nimal dunuhinga

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  2. Tribhawan Kaul18 July 2014 at 03:53

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    Let this poem become a prayer for universal Peace, in a volatile World with all the fighting & killing going on in the Middle East ! Thanks for sharing, -Raj
    17 Jul by RAJ NANDY

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  3. Tribhawan Kaul18 July 2014 at 03:54

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    Peace no war.........loud and clear, Sir.
    17 Jul by John Thomas Tharayil

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  4. Tribhawan Kaul18 July 2014 at 03:55

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    Valsa George (7/17/2014 11:17:00 PM)
    'Yet dawn doesn't wait for darkness to flee'

    It is this thought that gives hope to humanity! Peace and not war is the solution to most of the ills of the world..! Progress blossoms only in the fertile soil of peace....! A very relevant thought in this strife ridden times!

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  5. Tribhawan Kaul18 July 2014 at 03:56

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    Geetha Jayakumar (7/17/2014 9:10:00 AM)
    A thought provoking poem. Very true said fire is unable to differentiate and peace is set on
    Fire, killing many innocent ones. Whom to blame, human DNA cannot be relied upon where everything can be attained through love and peace! Beautiful write. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Tribhawan Kaul19 July 2014 at 07:14

    Today at 9:35 AM
    facebook
    Heather Burns commented on a link you shared.
    Heather wrote: "love and understanding is the key to peace and happiness. a great write"

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  7. Tribhawan Kaul19 July 2014 at 07:15

    Today at 8:24 AM
    facebook
    Dinah Moris commented on a link you shared.
    Dinah wrote: "" Love makes survival a better option Understanding paves the way for smooth transition"....an amazing click on the link...(y)"

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  8. Tribhawan Kaul19 July 2014 at 07:25

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    Shahzia Batool (7/18/2014 10:13:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem conceived and composed with a deep sincerity...very logically developed argument...the first line is an apt introduction...not a single word is without purpose...a studded piece with all the lines beautiful in it....congratulations on writing this piece!
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    Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/18/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    wonderful thought-provoking poem, since we have to be here, we have to build this planet with love
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  9. Tribhawan Kaul3 August 2014 at 09:42

    Jen Walls
    So very gifting in soul of humanity!
    "...Love makes survival a better option
    Understanding paves the way for smooth transition
    War becomes the casualty, peace rejoice and fly
    Like a dove flees from the cage of inhibitions
    To soar in the vast sky."
    (ia facebook)

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