A scary
story
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It was
December 12th of the year 1967.
I found
myself alone in the compartment with a book in my hand and a small jute
bag on my shoulders having nothing of importance yet which gave me the feeling
of a traveler. One’s possession is always like a treasure to him and the jute
bag was a real treasure for me as it contained two times meals for me. Silence
in the whole compartment was frightening and ominous. I was the lone passenger in the compartment
and it did not bode well for my onward journey.
Train was passing through chambal gaati in MP, infamous for it being
decoits infested area. I was scared what if dacoits stop the train and loot me
of my belongings! ! Fear engulfed me when the train stopped. It was pitch dark
outside. I gathered courage to come out of the compartment and to my relief I
found a small station outside. The strangest thing was that not a human soul
was in sight and a solitary light dimly expanding the shadows in octopus like
shapes gave me the creeps. As soon as I retreated inside my compartment, the
train jerked and then started. The wind gushed in. Three persons entered into my
compartment. I, tightening coat and shirt purchased with my hard earned money
with one hand and clutching my jute bag with another, sat in the corner of the
wooden berth near the window. They were looking nothing like decoits. No guns
in hand, no masked headgear, no big moustache and not heavily built yet I was
waiting for them to pounce on me to loot me.
When nothing happened, I got relaxed and started talking to those
unknown co-travellers. Soon everyone was talking and laughing. Shortly the
topic of talk veered around the ghosts. I never believed in ghosts so I was on
one side and those three were on other side. There was a hot discussion. At the
end, I got up and said, “gentlemen, you may not agree with me but the fact is
that I don’t believe in ghost in this scientific age. Ghosts are nonexistent.”
One of them
stood with dangerous posture and said,” you have to
agree fool” and saying so he vanished. I was left speechless and
wide eyed.
agree fool” and saying so he vanished. I was left speechless and
wide eyed.
“What is your view now?” said the second one and he also
vanished. I was about to faint with fear.
The third one asked, “shall I also leave, if you say ?”
“No” I shouted, “at least you don’t leave me alone. If you also
vanish, I will faint and the decoits will loot me. I prefer to be in the
company of ghosts rather than be looted by decoits. Damn my
scientific ideas.” He smiled, patted me and vanished. I simply
fainted feeling as if I was thrown into a deep ravine.
Someone was heavily patting me and I saw my co-travellers
laughing at me. To my chagrin I found that I had fallen down from
my lower berth to the floor. Actually while reading a horror novel, I
had fallen asleep and my sub-conscience had been playing tricks
with me.
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By Tribhawan
Kaul
kaultribhawan@yahoo.co.in
kaultribhawan@gmail.com
Babu
ReplyDeleteThriller ended in a comedy......................
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VAS
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
Dear TK,I enjoyed comedy more than Thrilling moments which is rare in scary story.
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rampy1951
ReplyDeleteA poet has been taken for a ride by Ghost, albeit Imaginery. Only Ghosts can inspire the poets more then the ordinary mortals and I wish I would haunt our dear TK to write more and more poetries, in the IN BETWEEN BIRTHS...
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