THE MISTAKE
( a short story)
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The train started moving.
“Hi going to
Mumbai,” he asked. He looked a rough and tough guy though smartly dressed.
“Yeah,” she
replied sternly resenting that he chose only her to talk to.
“I too” he
smiled but did not get any further response.
She was toying with her
mobile chatting on ‘whats up’ when she heard him saying to a couple seated
opposite birth.
“I am in Air
Force”
“ Wow ! Are you
? she asked him suddenly.
“ Yes.” He was
pleased and exhilarated by her attention.
“ Civilian or
uniformed ? “
“ Uniformed”
“ What rank?”
“ Sergeant, I
am commanding a squadron”
“ Which one ?
You see I have a great fascination for men in uniform”
“ Maratha
squadron” he said priding himself.
“ So you are in
Air Force, a sergeant and commanding a squadron” She started fiddling with her
mobile pretending not to be attentive to him. The couple remained cosy within
themselves oblivious of others in the coupe. He started listening to his IPOD.
At Baroda station, the
compartment was crowded with Air Force and local police. His bags were
searched. RDX was found alongwith pistols and ammunition. He was taken into
custody. He was totally bewildered, confused, surprised and perplexed.
“ Hey Mr. I am Nishi.
Squadron Leader Nishi of 29 Squadron, Indian Air Force. AF squadrons are
christened by numbers and not by names and a squadron is never commanded by a
sergeant. She said to him while he was being
whisked away by the police.
Her last words were ringing
in his ears in jail and he was cursing his masters/handlers who had trained him
across the border.
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ReplyDeletedanda008 4 hours ago
Interesting till the end.
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ReplyDeleteBabu
If one is smart another is smarter...
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ReplyDeleteVAS
Very interesting and intelligent short story.
Muscle power is nothing in front of masterly minded women!!!...
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ReplyDeleterameshsinghal
Happy to see that Tribhawan Kaul is back in action .
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ReplyDeletedrukgupta
A true guiding story that one should always be smart enough to identify and put such impersonator to task and punish them. I trly appreciate and wish to read such story again ,thanks sir
Dr Umesh Gupta
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What a beautiful piece of writing
ReplyDeletePromilla Qazi Wonderful story! Short and crisp! (via facebook)
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ReplyDeleteHari1941
And I thought these guys are trained to keep to themselves. But then there are short time delivery boys who want to show off.
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ReplyDeletesyamala
When telling lies one has to do a lot of homework!
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ReplyDeleterampy1951
Is the story frictious or real. very informative
ReplyDeleteAbdul Wahab
read and enjoyed , lovely story ....
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ReplyDeleteBhuvanpati Sharma
बहुत अच्छा लगा आप की बहुमुखी प्रतिभा से साक्षात कर
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viswas Yesterday, 12:41
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krishna46 Yesterday, 14:59
Good short story by TK Sir..
TVK
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