Thursday 19 February 2015

Zindha hain jab tak ज़िंदा हैं जब तक

Zindha hain jab tak
Likhte hain tab tak
Koyi Kadr nahi karta ?
Marte hain jab
Kahten hai sab
Aisa ab koyi aur nahi likhta.
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Sarvadhikar surakshit/ Tribhawan Kaul

ज़िंदा हैं जब तक
लिखते हैं तब तक
कोई कद्र नहीं करता ?

मरते हैं जब
कहते हैं सब
ऐसा अब कोई और नहीं लिखता.
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सर्वधिकार सुरक्षित/ त्रिभवन कौल

15 comments:

  1. Kavi Sanjay Sah
    February 19 at 2:37pm
    वाह सर
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  2. Charu Dev
    February 19 at 2:47pm
    वाह क्या बात है.......
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  3. Rajesh Joshi
    February 19 at 3:00pm

    Maaza aa gaya bhai !! Muflisi aur gumnami bhi manzoor hai jinhe Wo haath kalam se duniya badal dengay ----Rajesh Joshi

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  4. Parul Tomar
    February 19 at 3:09pm
    Very nice

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  5. Manisha Bhatia
    February 19 at 3:24pm

    Bahut khoob sir

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  6. Shaista Irshad
    February 19 at 6:57pm

    Bahot khoob waah

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  7. Himanshu Sahni
    February 19 at 7:13pm

    Wah sir jee wah

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  8. Vinay Kumar Singh
    February 19 at 7:17pm

    Bahut achchaa

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  9. Sikandera Mir 1:14pm Feb 20
    Wah! Khoob kaha aap ney!

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  10. Nazre Imam
    February 20 at 3:08pm

    Tribhawan Sir - kiya khoob likhte hain aap.. i still remember ur poem - Teri kyu jali

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  11. Aroona Reejhsinghani
    February 20 at 5:25pm

    i guess so true

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  12. Vijay Tanna 1:21pm Feb 20
    Bilkul Sahi Kaha Sir.

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  13. Anish Vyavahare 8:02pm Feb 22
    Haha! Very nice!

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  14. Barar Shantnu 6:30am Feb 23
    waah waah
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    Soumya Mohanty Vilekar 8:44pm Feb 21
    awesome and so true lines! i completely agree

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  15. Indrajit Ghoshal 10:21am Feb 24
    Nice nice sir
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    Shriram Murthi 9:33am Feb 24
    Baja farmaya sir aapne.
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    Radhika Kanth 8:23pm Feb 23
    wah ji kya likha hai

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