tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post7785773675559765202..comments2023-06-28T02:26:44.071-07:00Comments on Tribhawan Kaul: Oh God! Oh Ishwar! Oh Allaha!Tribhawan Kaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-16027346088316402122016-06-29T10:18:18.537-07:002016-06-29T10:18:18.537-07:00Date & Time: 6/26/2016 2:53:00 AM
Poem:...Date & Time: 6/26/2016 2:53:00 AM <br />Poem: 27507335 - Oh God! Oh Ishwar! Oh Allaha!<br />Member: Rajnish Manga<br />Comment: More than being an humble prayer, the poem is like a loaded tete e tete with God Almighty. <br />these blood sucking vampires / taking toll of your creations / torturing and tormenting /....though they suffer as YOU ordained<br />------------------------------------------via poemhunterTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-26030837358907348102015-06-14T03:21:47.138-07:002015-06-14T03:21:47.138-07:00Bishwanath Mukherjee 12:25pm Jun 13
The Eternal Un...Bishwanath Mukherjee 12:25pm Jun 13<br />The Eternal Unsolved Crossword Puzzle :D Thanks for sharing Mr Kaul<br /><br /> via Poetry by Heather Burns/fbTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-14850662936098083422015-06-06T08:47:46.324-07:002015-06-06T08:47:46.324-07:00VAS Jun 4
Oh..TK,Oh..Babu, Oh Hari,
Wonderful poe...VAS Jun 4<br />Oh..TK,Oh..Babu, Oh Hari,<br /> Wonderful poem and enjoyed it very much.Me being a lay man, in reality we take birth at our parent will or His will???..<br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-62147106802957891342015-06-06T08:46:53.051-07:002015-06-06T08:46:53.051-07:00Hari1941 Jun 4
May your prayer be answered.
If th...Hari1941 Jun 4<br />May your prayer be answered. <br />If there were no such things in this world, there was need for God.<br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-74076950333174532772015-06-06T08:46:07.033-07:002015-06-06T08:46:07.033-07:00Babu Jun 4
Good verses. God ultimately has control...Babu Jun 4<br />Good verses. God ultimately has control is the essence of this poem.<br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-57873783694567454162015-06-04T00:50:08.768-07:002015-06-04T00:50:08.768-07:00Neelofar Neelu 6:47pm Jun 3
Amen
-----------------...Neelofar Neelu 6:47pm Jun 3<br />Amen<br />--------------------------------------------------- <br />Ramesh Pathania 6:42pm Jun 3<br />Excellent<br /><br />via fb/PCTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-46430447185588210032015-06-04T00:41:11.026-07:002015-06-04T00:41:11.026-07:00Jai Krishna 11:37pm Jun 3
"I apologise for be...Jai Krishna 11:37pm Jun 3<br />"I apologise for being ......in their heart and soul." Very nice. All these happenings are also the result of God's will. You are expected to do such incredible work.<br /><br />via fb/PSOITribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-1715529068831378592015-06-04T00:39:56.516-07:002015-06-04T00:39:56.516-07:00
Tribhawan Kaul 7:16pm Jun 3
Bindu Kulshrestha Ji... <br />Tribhawan Kaul 7:16pm Jun 3<br />Bindu Kulshrestha Ji :- Yes, sentiments are more or less same as third stanza of my poem says.. your words are meaningful...It is so nice of you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.बहुत ही सुन्दर भावपूर्ण अभिव्यक्ति :)<br />Bindu Kulshrestha <br />Bindu Kulshrestha 6:57pm Jun 3<br />त्रिभुवन सर आपकी कविता पढ़कर मुझे अपनी कविता की कुछ इसी भाव को लिए हुए पंक्तियाँ याद आगईं<br />प्रभु मैंने नहीं बनाईं वासनाएं <br />मैंने नहीं बनाईं कामनाएं<br />ये सब तुम्हीं ने दिया था<br />मैंने तो इन्हें सिर्फ जिया था<br />तुम चाहते तो मुझे रोक सकते थे |<br />पर तुमने ऐसा नहीं किया |<br />सर माफ़ कीजियेगा कुछ-कुछ अपनी सी लगी कविता इसलिए अपनी पंक्तियाँ लिख दीं आपकी कविता बहुत सुन्दर hai<br /><br />via fb/PSOITribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.com