tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post5968166820423477216..comments2023-06-28T02:26:44.071-07:00Comments on Tribhawan Kaul: चतुष्पदी (Quatrain)-1Tribhawan Kaulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-50390270313323623892015-05-24T22:56:03.931-07:002015-05-24T22:56:03.931-07:00Seharyar Khan Uncle ji its reminds me movie sangam...Seharyar Khan Uncle ji its reminds me movie sangam<br />----------------------------------------------------------------------<br />Ramkishore Upadhyay वाह वाह<br />------------------------------------------<br />Manoj Kamdev Sharma Wah ji wah<br /><br />via fb/24-05-2015Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-53546214043659773442015-05-15T04:35:20.749-07:002015-05-15T04:35:20.749-07:00Ishita Yesterday, 20:30
V appreciate you posting i...Ishita Yesterday, 20:30<br />V appreciate you posting in Romi script alongside...<br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-28491464035252064872015-05-15T04:34:00.627-07:002015-05-15T04:34:00.627-07:00Babu Yesterday, 18:05
Nice
Babu Yesterday, 18:05<br />Nice <br />Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-81994839332419613692015-05-15T04:32:31.432-07:002015-05-15T04:32:31.432-07:00akm15 Yesterday, 17:37
Good poem.It reminds us of ...akm15 Yesterday, 17:37<br />Good poem.It reminds us of our gone days of youth.<br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-14847085508595598212015-05-15T02:27:32.961-07:002015-05-15T02:27:32.961-07:00Dear Hari Bhai : you are very right. A change in a...<br />Dear Hari Bhai : you are very right. A change in a word, a comma makes a lot of difference to a poem or a written feelings. 'Afsos' gives a feeling of sadness which the sun does not feel as it has to rise compulsorily. 'Aakrosh' is severe anger which the sun is feeling (having disturbed the lovers )as has it been in its hands, it would not have risen as all. Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Love that.<br />And please don't call me Sir, dear Hari Bhai<br />Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-89221462398591140842015-05-15T02:26:05.680-07:002015-05-15T02:26:05.680-07:00Hari1941 Yesterday, 17:08
Uday hone par sooraj ko ...Hari1941 Yesterday, 17:08<br />Uday hone par sooraj ko bhi 'aakrosh' ki jagah 'afsosh' kaise rahega Sir. Lo and behold I am also on a learning curve now. We have you and babu the regular poets in our midst and it will be naive on my part to even suggest a change.hahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaa<br />But you can floow what Tagore did. many a times his friends suggested to change one word or line and he readily agreed to do so to please them but the final script was what he had written. <br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-67183599923556221322015-05-15T02:24:40.736-07:002015-05-15T02:24:40.736-07:00rameshsinghal Yesterday, 16:36
क्या खूब ?
via ver...rameshsinghal Yesterday, 16:36<br />क्या खूब ?<br /><br />via verdurezTribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-81538873485769839292015-05-15T02:21:55.623-07:002015-05-15T02:21:55.623-07:00Indrajit Ghoshal
Khub sir
-----------------------...Indrajit Ghoshal <br />Khub sir<br />---------------------------------------<br />Meetu Kapur <br />सुंदर<br />----------------------------------<br />Menika Sajwan <br />Khub kha sir <br /><br />via fb/PC 14-05-2015Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-29531851980272874672015-05-14T22:55:50.209-07:002015-05-14T22:55:50.209-07:00Ranjna Nautiyal वाह
------------------------------...Ranjna Nautiyal वाह<br />------------------------------<br />Rameshwer Singh Sunder.<br />-------------------------------------------<br />Shailesh Gupta वाह.... क्या बात....<br />----------------------------------------------<br />Vinita Singh bindaas kya baat<br />---------------------------------------------<br />via fb/purple pen Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-78791506458243930192015-05-14T07:14:43.049-07:002015-05-14T07:14:43.049-07:00Pawan Batra aadarniy ati sundr
-------------------...Pawan Batra aadarniy ati sundr<br />--------------------------------------------<br />Chhaya Shukla आप की समर्थ लेखनी से सृंगगारिक मुक्तक का सृजन हुआ है ।<br />बहुत बहुत बधाई<br /><br />via fb/YUSM 14-05-2015Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-39042625482208032252015-05-14T07:13:28.715-07:002015-05-14T07:13:28.715-07:00Om Prakash Shukla सुन्दर भाव बेहतरीन सृजन
सादर नमन...Om Prakash Shukla सुन्दर भाव बेहतरीन सृजन<br />सादर नमन् अभिनन्दन<br />---------------------------------------------------<br />Vijay Mishr Daanish सुंदर भावों की अभिव्यक्ति<br /><br />via fb/yusm 14-05-2015Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5477761471463253441.post-47251828229699910252015-05-14T07:12:14.445-07:002015-05-14T07:12:14.445-07:00Ramkishore Upadhyay सुन्दर भावपूर्ण ,,बधाई आदरणीय
...Ramkishore Upadhyay सुन्दर भावपूर्ण ,,बधाई आदरणीय<br />------------------------------------------------------------------<br />Indira Sharma sundar<br /><br />via fb/YUSM on 14-05-2015Tribhawan Kaulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13087247132161171107noreply@blogger.com